|Reviewed by serenety L
|what wonderful words about the ocean.
Love the pic you painted.
|Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
|Excellent imagery....enjoyed this immensely..
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent poem... could visualize it quite easily thanx to your poetic skills...|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Jack, this is a wonderful write, although I must admit I have always had a little trouble staying within the lines, and besides aren't rules just written to be broken...I always found them a bit of a challenge ;-)|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|I love this write Jack! Staying in between
the lines is so important. When we get out side the lines and boundaries, stange things will happen to us. Bill Murray
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|I am glad that i am able to read this great write...thanks for the re-post....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Interesting thoughts well written!|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Excellent Jack, enjoyed reading.
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Excellant Work Jack...Beautiful Imagery leading to Enchanting Poetry with a GREAT MESSAGE!!!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Jack I remember this beauty as it so impressed me, I'm delighted to read it again, it's a classic!|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Well worth the repost...
|Reviewed by Sandra Corona
|Beautiful poem, well written but, still, some lines need to changed . . . depending on why they exist and why wrote 'em.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|lovely and beautifully done Jack...I could hear and see the ocean in movement!!
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|~Excellent my friend..
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|Beautiful, Jack. Living along the coast, I can relate. We have a 17 foot high seawall protecting the city of Galveston, Tx from the Gulf of Mexico's fury.
This poem is fantastic. I love it! We rhymers need to stick together. Have a great day!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|good write, jack; well done! :) (((HUGS)))|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Beautifully written Jack. I love this.
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Great flow and rhyme. Great coverage of the topic.
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Wonderful read Jack. One many of us can relate too. I can still remember my Mother saying to me: "Little girls don't play football" This one did! Even if it was against the rules and out of line! Thanks Jack,,~SH~|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so lovely and beautifully done, enjoyed reading it so much,