the rebuilding
by evan m horetsky
Tuesday, July 08, 2003
Rated "G" by the Author.
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to live with the deep-seated feeling in your chest
the product of a marvel, a word weaver, not many would guess,
different from the usual wordmonger or preacher,
truly a stern believer, a vast recondite speaker
never knew which was weaker, the student or the teacher.
The words spoken get caught in the back of my mind,
many days to learn, many years am i behind.
But the faith that falls is not in dispute of this dude,
the intake is crude and the response may be subdued,
for the thought embued needs no comment for refuge.
Not even myself can understand what's going through my mind,
Why feel so weak, lazy and to the world remain so blind.
It is thought that the phrases i do not hear or don't care,
But from year to year my soul soaks in the dear...
...thoughts of this one, watch out he's not done,
till the corporate ear is aware of the war he has won.
A war of good and evil, only truth can reveal,
That good may be real but sinners jaws are made of steel,
The con artist with his heartless ways are hardest...
...to contend with it seems u can't win unless to sin.
Which forces the rethinking, let the reformation begin.
To lead the revolution, to succeed in evolution,
one must build a reputation, for who can lead the nation,
While acting as irrigation, feeding the minds while remaining sacred.
Against the hatred to the ways of elation
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/9/2003 |
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| Very well done young man!! |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
7/9/2003 |
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| This is really a free flow. Bill |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
7/8/2003 |
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Awesome Work...this piece speaks loud and clear...may you never lose such volume!!!!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader) |
7/8/2003 |
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| Very well done young man. You surprise me..Maybe i did do something right..I let you be free..It shows in your thoughts.. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Emmanuel Bnedavi ben-YEHU |
7/8/2003 |
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Keep writing Poet... Stand up for what You say, and say what Eternal
Mother taught You to be real, for it is the right time for
"the rebuilding".
I see how "the rebuilding" places the message. I have understood most
of it, and more shall be taught to me when I re-read heedfully its
letters contents - WORDS –
that describe reality and depict the intention of all that destroys, and all
that wants "the rebuilding" of the planet.
This poem has taught me to stand for "the rebuilding" and to learn
how to better my existence and my environment.
I have learned through an inspiring reading.
I Salute the Author of “the rebuilding”.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
7/8/2003 |
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Keep writing Poet... Stand up for what You say, and say what Eternal
Mother thought You to be real, for it is the right time for
"the rebuilding".
I see how "the rebuilding" places the message. I have understood most
of it, and more shall be thought to me when I re-read heedfully its
letters contents - WORDS –
that describe reality and depict the intention of all that destroys, and all
that wants "the rebuilding" of the planet.
This poem has taught me to stand for "the rebuilding" and to learn
how to better my existence and my environment.
I have learned through an inspiring reading.
I Salute the Author of “the rebuilding”.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/8/2003 |
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| Excellent write good points,I'll have to look at the site;-) |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
7/8/2003 |
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Our minds seem to have a life of its own. When our thoughts come to live, they jump from good to bad, and from bad to good, and makes us totally confused.
Good write!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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