|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was excellent, I loved this, beautifully written,
|Reviewed by michael
|Passion and feelings flow through you into your pen...Well done...michael|
|Reviewed by Marco Landi
|a wonderful piece that....consume the thought on both ends.....|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
"Burning Up" is a lamp of desires nourish with oils of life scented by
Cupid with aroma of satisfaction to please Frigg. It is a lamp that
keeps its light on blinking to keep alive the reason of living. It can't stop
its oils from burning for desires must be fulfilled and the only thing to be
recalled is pleasure for it brings energy to keep its flame on.
“Burning Up” delivers its message from the first to the last line.
I have enjoyed a pleasant and striking reading.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Dena Moore
|Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
|Some like it hot and you definitely get that in this poem. This is not as naughty as you usually are but it's sweet and definitely romantic.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|full of passion, this write! well done, donna! :) (((HUGS)))|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
just gorgeous...passionate and beautifully written
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|A BEAUTIFUL PIECE!!!!
Love the metaphor used...ahhhh such burning yearning love and desire!!!!
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|You got me burning from both ends.|
|Reviewed by David Knight
|Lovely images. Out there is a lucky man indeed.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Beautiful, now you have all of us burning up!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most passionate ya!!
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|Awesome write... awesome imagery, dear friend...
~~~Love, Light and Harmony~~~
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Beautiful write indeed! Such lovely feelings.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Dhruv Foster
I cannot recall
how or when
I've been burning
from the start ...too good.
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Wonderfully written Donna. Passionate yet very soft and gentle. Bill Murray|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
|... a nice declaration of gentle passion!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|marvelous metaphor,to melt by;-)excellent poem!|