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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
12/10/2003 |
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another good poem
but i would change "foreigner" because the word is not very descriptive. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
7/11/2003 |
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| Good stuff |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
7/10/2003 |
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Hi Diana. Good write. Unless I miss my guess, though, the foreigner is sitting by the fire, not siting. Although I could be wrong if the foreigner is peering out into the dark at objects.
Best regards,
Leland |
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