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|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|another good poem
but i would change "foreigner" because the word is not very descriptive.
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Hi Diana. Good write. Unless I miss my guess, though, the foreigner is sitting by the fire, not siting. Although I could be wrong if the foreigner is peering out into the dark at objects.