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Ferocious Heart
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Thursday, July 10, 2003

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“Live your life with an open heart
And not with the ferocious thoughts”
-Bhuwan Thapaliya


Life governed by a ferocious heart
Would soon descend into the sludge
Of devastation from the clout of its
Own compressed nefarious thoughts
For it paralyses the veins of compassion
And smolders the blood of divine love
In the furnace of interminable disgust
Deceived by the glitter of transient lust
Constantly asserted by the physical norms
Beyond the domains of conscious resort
In this seriously wounded comatose Earth,
Where the conscience of the unconscious
Eclipses the conscience of the conscious
With the mysterious dust of putrefaction
That contaminates the vibes of harmony
And conceal its root in the sludge of discord
As innately indicated by the ferocious heart

Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader) 10/10/2003
It's that last verse that's the clincher in this outstanding poem:

As innately indicated by the ferocious heart

The keyword here "innately" ... sad that many folks are like that!

Richard Vallance

Reviewed by Kate Clifford 7/11/2003
A great write!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 7/11/2003
Great wisdom in a most excellant piece!
Reviewed by Christine Morell 7/11/2003
Excellent work Bhuwan.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/11/2003
This was excellent, wise and powerful, I loved this,

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader) 7/11/2003
Interesting write..thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by Dale Clark 7/11/2003
Excellent write!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/11/2003
very powerful imagery Bhuwan!!
Love is the most beautiful thing....and it hurts sometimes sooo bad!!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 7/11/2003
Wise thoughts, wrapped in an excellent poem.
Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader) 7/11/2003
Life is too short my friend...Excellent work.. michael
Reviewed by jude forese 7/11/2003
very powerful imagery... excellent syntax...
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/10/2003
Breathless with admiration Bhuwan! awesome write!
Reviewed by William Bonilla 7/10/2003

Reviewed by Dove (Reader) 7/10/2003
Wonderful visions here...

peace and joy,
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 7/10/2003
Love in a heart is much better?
Written well.......
Have a great tomorrow!
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