|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Indeed very chilling. A heart abused one too many times is what it sounds like to me. Very shattering words. Bottom of the pit words...an SOS. Wow David, I am awed.
|Reviewed by Sandra Corona
|Chilling . . . but we all have such moments when goodness, happiness, seems very far away. They pass . . . everything does :).
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Good dark write!!|
|Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
|Your words say so much... great write..
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|My dear friend..
Time may not heal
but it will make it
better. Hang in there..
You know where I am
if you need a friend.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|David this is excellent!!!!
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|This goes to the nub of despair. Good dark write.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Dark write that has been well done!|
|Reviewed by Brittany Renée
|Eeeh, goose skin is quite the word to use! A darkness has fallen upon the eyes of a soul is what I perceived from this poem (not talking about you but the narrator). Most excellant.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
a chilling, haunting write that will stay with me a while
well done (hope you're okay)
love and (((HUGS))),
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Excellent! It gave me goosebumps.
|Reviewed by Sage Largo (Reader)
|Without that special love in our hearts,the emptiness can overwhelm. You have stated this
succinctly in this piece.Very well done
All the best Sage
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|Ooh, quite a chilly little poem...speaks volumes!!!|