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Can--Can
by Ron (sketchman) Axelson

Friday, July 11, 2003

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Can a dog talk?

Can you crawl to me for forgiveness?

Can you talk as if your sorry?

Can this world end?

Can I still love you after you did that?

Can I always forgive you?

Can you forgive yourself?

Can the jealous find satisfaction?

Your a rolling stone,

so itís doubtful

Can your greed get enough money?

banks canít hold all your money

Can you kill for more?

Can your sinful ways ever end?

Can you shut up for five seconds

so I can get a word in edge ways?

Can a cow fly?

Can the answer be in you as an individual?

Ron Axelson
©7/11/03
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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/20/2007
Worthy questions that provide substance for thought, Ron. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 7/18/2003
this is really interesting...the questions are easy enough, but I think I'm missing something...perhaps part of my brain that controls my thinking? there's more to this than I'm seeing or reading
Reviewed by Lynn Barry 7/13/2003
Saw the title and thought you'd have a buxom can can dancer in the sketch but nooooooo I was wrong and as usual you wrote and drew something totally off the wall and clever and entertaining and unique...you da man... cuzz you are...
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 7/12/2003
Yes is the answer there inside? For some it is not and some it is? Depends who the person is and how she relates to you. The dog looks relaxed and happy. What is his name? Your friend Bill
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 7/12/2003
Hmmmmm...I wish I had all the answers but I can can can NOT answer them sorry dear! ;O)
This is a clever and crafty write and that pic...Ron those aren't really your feet are they...lol...j/k...this is just a SUPER WRITE all the way around!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 7/12/2003
hahahahahah...those are big feet there, Bubba. Introspective today, aren't we. [smiles]
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 7/12/2003
(((ron)))

yes
yes
yes
yes
i hope so
ditto :)
no
i hope so
no--i'm always broke so i have no money LOL
no--murder is illegal and immoral
no--not without God's Grace they can't
*HUSHIN UP* LOL
i don't know...never seen a cow fly *but i've seen horse flies LOL*
and lastly...i hope so

(((RON))) i ADORE this poem and sketch--savin it to my library to read again and again

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

i'm okay...just keep me in your prayers
Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon 7/12/2003
Hi Ron,

Thank you for saying you missed me :) and for the comments you made on my newest. This poem is an original, just like you. ;) Silver
Reviewed by jing javier 7/12/2003
great questions!

so, can they?..
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 7/12/2003
"Can a cow fly?" What a subtle, brief, profound key you've stuck into this drama of questions.. this strikes me as a very important write.. it is certainly an important read! Well done, Ron. katy.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/12/2003
Thought provoking but delightful write; Only you can come up with this gem! (((HUGS))) :) BRAVO to Sketchman! :)
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 7/12/2003
Super questions, poem and pic. Love it.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 7/12/2003
It is your last statement that spoke the loudest. Fantastic write.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 7/12/2003
Hahaha! Great questions Ron!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/12/2003
For you anytime.........or lets make it a maybe for so long!!!!!

SmoooooooooooOOOOOOOOOch!!!!

Very creative write "Ron" :)))))!!

Ya I can!!

Love
Tinka
Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra 7/12/2003
Great questions :-) don't have the answers ready for you I'm afraid
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/11/2003
This was excellent Ron..Loved it!

Reindeer
Reviewed by jude forese 7/11/2003
when dogs talk, cows fly...
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 7/11/2003
7-11-03

It is Why Every Child Should Be Taught To Say:

May I !!!!

TRASK
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 7/11/2003
No, yes, yes, yes, I hope so, I hope so, I donít know, yes, probably not, never, yes, yes, noÖI hope so.

Oh sorry, were you talking to me? Hehehehehehe.
Reviewed by Linda Hill 7/11/2003
~Excellent write, my friend..

~~Linda~~
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan 7/11/2003
So many questions!! So little time to answer!!
Hugs
Jenni
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/11/2003
Ron hon you are asking some heavy questions,don't know if you'll get any answers, but good show my friend! love the sketch!
Reviewed by Lady Peg 7/11/2003
Oh dear tis no fever I have comment trigger.. lol love the sketch ....
{{{smiles}}}
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 7/11/2003
Ron,
"Can the answer be in you as an individual?
This is so good food for thought..... No sketch let me feel your forhead and see if it is warm
{smiles}}
Lady Peg...

Love your poem.
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