Aidan
by Amy Hodge
Saturday, July 12, 2003
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My little brother
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When my life is getting tough and I feel I can't go on,
I think of you,
When things are getting rough and I feel the day's too long
I belive in you,
When there is no where to go and I feel more than lonely,
I turn to you,
You make me smile when it comes to cheering me up you are the only,
Aidan with your big brown eyes and crooked smile, you bring out the best in me,
Aidan, in this life of lies, you make it worthwile, you put the love in me,
My brother, at six months old has saved me from self harm,
My brother, at six months old has got undeniable charm!
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| Reviewed by Brittany Renée |
7/14/2003 |
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Wow! How sweet. When he is old enough to appreciate this he will never forget it, I'm sure of that. 'When things are getting rough and I feel the day's too long
I believe in you,'
That struck me hard. So sweet, Amy!
-br- |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/12/2003 |
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| sounds like he's larger than life ;) very well written... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/12/2003 |
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| Sounds like such a little charmer! Glad you have him in your life! Now be good to him, okay?? Good write, Amy! :) (((HUGS))) |
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