|Reviewed by serenety L
|Patience is one of the most difficult things to learn...
Loved the last lines.
|Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
|"Patience is the heart of the lovers
with much patience, the pure lovers
wait for each other eternally forever
and ignites the esteem for each other,
with the inborn hope of get-together. "
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Beautifully done Bhuwan, that is also some sketch, I don't see a signature? Patience is a virtue I have need of badly;-)!|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Wonderfully written, Bhuwan. You are a true and wise poet!|
|Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
|This is very nice Bhuwan.
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
An absolutely beautiful and profound piece. I'm glad you posted it again.
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|"Patience" is a creation of an inspired mind fed with knowledge and wisdom.
I thank You.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Wise and beautiful Bhuwan...but patience is the one thing I still need to learn!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Patience is the one thing I still need to learn! Wonderful, beautiful write!|
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Bravo! Bhuwan this is another profound write! ~Z~|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so wise and beautiful, love your poetry so much, excellent!
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|Smiling while immersed in the profound thoughts this awesome write generates...
"Patience is the father of hope." Indeed it is.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Patience is a virtue, as one had said
and thus it becomes a thoery.
It always was meant in that manner.
Just as the thoery of the gravity,
the apple always falls to the ground.
It always have been said that way.
Good thought-prvoking piece!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Such wisdome and gentleness a teacher you are and a poet of excellence.
"Patience is the light of the world,
with much patience; the infant ray
turns into the glittering radiance
and envelops the whole Earth,
with the balmy love of affiliation "
Your words are always gentle instruction in theses ones..
Love N Luck My poet Friend.....
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Bhuwan, you write with a beautiful flair. Your fine grasp of knowledge and writing ability are so great. I enjoy all your poetry. I looked at the picture. Lady seems to be sitting alone ... Does she have any hope? Hope so. Great write. Bill Murray|