As Her Response Will Totally Shock You (World) Anew Reality...
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Saturday, July 12, 2003
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As She Danielle Drove Her Hot Red Pontiac Firebird All To Holy Hell,I Tuned(Tamed) It, Truly Her Soul(Possessed)Was On Fire_
In Series #2 Poem Follows Italiano,Only She's Puerto Rican,Next Black Girl_More_
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THEY SHALL KNOW TIME IS ETERNITY
(My Peace I Leave With You,My Own Peace I Give You,A Peace This World Cannot Give To You) c 1979/2003 TRASK
A Poem Especially For You Danielle...
Your Name So Different,Accent,Woman,Near,
Exciting Towards Making Me Want Be Near
You!Listen To You TalkTelephoneOf Love,We
Both Need Love &Understanding!Walk WithMe
Early SundayMorn,I,TRASK Will Tell You;Me
Of What LoveIs!To Care &ShareI True Love,
Serve Humanity,YouMustGainMeaningOf Love,
Until You Respect This Very Fact; Love Is
(Myth)Shit!TrueLove Comes To You As If By
Magic!This Why we Are All In Hell,(Deny),
OnPlanet Earth,LastStop In Universe!Deny_
The Soul What It Needs Your Mind Becomes
Sick!Open Up Your Heart To Humanity.What
In Hell Does Soul Have To DoWith Mind?Cut
You'll Learn as You Read My Poem It'Touch
Upon Your Soul Which's Pure InItself,Much
ItTakes Care ItsOwn,Thrives On Meaning,It
You Become WhichYou Are Influenced By,Fit
Belief Powerful, Can Acccomplish All You
Desire!Let Go OfREALITY,Your Desires,You
Become Your Own Problems,Obstacles! You
Danielle Fall Into Pit Of No Return_
You Become NotWhat You Need,ThatWhich You
Did not Want To Be In 1st Place.Cut You,
Yourself Off From Humanity You Have!Why
Create More Hell In Your Life?Cut out,Vie
Hell Of YOUR OWN MAKING,Treat Yourself
Better,But,GiveOf YourselfTo Humanity!To
Care&Share Is What Life's All About,True_
Why We Are All Here!Learn To School Your-
Self To Hold GREAT THOUGHTS;Control Your
Imagination!Fool You will Not Become As
Possessed--Hold Only InYour Mind Those As
Thing's Are Good&DESIREABLE!For Your Very
Life Is Product Of MOLD Of Your Own Very
Imagination! GUARD IT CAREFULLY!The Right
ATTITUDE Towards YourProblemsFore Fright_
At ThisVery Moment;Thinking,Saying,Doing_
RIGHT THING To Utmost Of Your Ability!You
Think Of Those Things You Wish Attain,You
And, Those Desires To Undertake,Fully Re-
Laxed,Breathing Deeply,Do Fall Asleep Re-
Laxed With This PICTURE In Your MIND_
HeldFirmly InYour Mind,InMorning YourMind
You Will Awaken In Happy Frame Of Mind;In
ABSOLUTE Certainty,It Will Be That Day In
Which Will Arrive When Your Dreams Duly
WillCome True!Your Certainty WillBe Truly
Based Upon TRUTH! Indeed For You, Your_
DREAMS MUST COME TRUE...
Tear's TRASK c 1979/2003 TRASK
A Poem (Her)Startling Response, Danielle, She Writes To Me:
As close as breathe and blood
Yet as far as lasting peace
Arriving at every moment
Yet ever delayed
The Look of Love in evey face
Yet faceless yourself
On a winter shore
When I turned from the sea
For no other reason
Than its cold majesty
And saw down the sand
One long lost from sight
But never far from soul
In that moment
I knew you simply
The way 1st person ever to
Breathe knew you
And the way the last person ever
To breathe will know you
To you from me
DANIELLE . . . . . . . c 1980/2003 TRASK
She Never Wrote Poetry, But, Inspired By Her Walks On Winter Beach Puerto Rico Gave Her Needed Peace Of Mind_
I'd Met Danielle Dancing In Winter 1980;
Then She Called Me In July 1980...
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|Reviewed by serenety L
this is something that made me think - and I am thankful for it.
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|An excellent, interesting, and impressive write.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent descriptive analysis...|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|I loved this Trask, So excellent! So much you put of yourself here, I loved reading this, wonderful!
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Interesting write TRASK!...and thank you for sharing!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Glad you're sharing more Trask, this is great, keep sharing!|
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
I am loving this series. You cover a wide gamut of life as it, as it should be and of how it can be, if only if. This is going to be one hell of a book. I truly am in awe of you. Thank you.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|*speechless* i am in total awe, trask; this is quite impressive! wonderful job! :) (((HUGS)))|
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Trask, this is a powerful write! ~Z~|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
i agree, powerful, excellent write
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Excellent words my friend. Am glad I stopped in today to read.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Wow!! I am in awe!!!
Love Is (Myth)Shit!TrueLove Comes To You As If By Magic!This Why we Are All In Hell,(Deny), On Planet Earth
Impressive write Trask!!