|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|I loved this, just excellent! Loving that last line here,
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|This is great. very well done.
|Reviewed by serenety L
|That's the right thing I'd say.
Spoil him with your presence, the love in your eyes, your smell...and then leave and make him run and catch you.
That is what men ask for
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Sara, this would put lighting in his heart if you did this to him. Then he would dance for you to the tune of, "I Surrender Dear." I thought Jay's comment onyou poem was very nice. Bill Murray|
|Reviewed by EmptyMartiniBottle
|Didn't I ask you to stay a while?|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Dripping with anticipation!!
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Love this Sara....Loved how you opened it...bloody fantastic!!...ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|would make me drip with anticipation...|
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|I love leaving them with that feeling "How does it feel to want!"....lol! This is great :)
|Reviewed by J. Murphy
|Just the thought of that is enough! I could see that happening, giving that look and then walking away. Greatimage. J.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wonderful write, Super Girl! I like this!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Bravo! This is so cooooooooooooool I love it!Perfect for summer heat;-)!|
|Reviewed by Angelica Young
|This is OUTSTANDING!!! :) Great Write.