Those Sensual Feelings
by Jenni Kalicharan
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Ah!! Once again this feeling of bliss,
I'd almost forgotten how badly I needed this!
Feeling my naked body being caressed,
Feeling my entire soul being possessed.
It's been a while since I've experienced this sensation,
My wet and warm body yielding to the sensation.
Riding those waves of ecstasy,
Living again my wildest fantasy.
While I lay waiting for those waves of passion,
With foam now covering my skin so ashen,
I dream of things you always do to me,
And the sensations I experience while I'm alone with thee.
You thrill me so much, it is a shame,
To waste our time together playing this game.
I'd much rather be here riding you,
Until my body is black and blue.
So I guess I'll stay here a while longer,
And enjoy it as you get faster and stronger.
Anticipating the things you'll do to me,
While I'm alone skinny-dipping in the sea.
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|Reviewed by Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Erratum < < < < < < < < < < < < <
On my review of "Those Sensual Feelings", posted July 13, on the left top I wrote July 31, 2003. PLEASE READ JULY 29, 2003.
I thank You for this beautiful poem,
"Those Sensual Feelings".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|July 31, 2003
Wonders synchronized by a heart that dictates beauty.
"Those Sensual Feelings", the poem, keeps its flowing all the way to the sea of emotions to flood the reader's imagination.
When "Those Sensual Feelings" were felt poetry incorporated its body.
"Those Sensual Feelings" shows what poetry is made of.
I praise the Author of "Those Sensual Feelings".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
loved the twisted ending
|Reviewed by Sandra Corona
|The ending was not what one expected to hear so you do have a wave of words to entrance :)!
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Oh I love skinny-dipping into the sea too. Love this write Jenni!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
|Reviewed by J. Murphy
|So erotic and yet you weren't sensored--quite a feat. Great fantasy, great write. J.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|this is absolutely beautiful, jenni! well done, sweetie! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :)|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Very romantic and sensual.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very romantic and beautiful Jenni!!
|Reviewed by Steve Ralph
|very romantic and very sensual jenni,
I hope you enjoy your swim..lol
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|This is outstanding write from you....clap clap clap....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Very nice Jenni!
|Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
|awwww...Nothin' like a little oooolllaaalla|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Very romantic and beautiful, so lovely,
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Dynamic write Jenni, great anticipation;-)!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Nothing better then skin and water. Great write!|