As What We (You) Want Isn't Always What You Get...
by - - - - - - - TRASK
Sunday, July 13, 2003
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Karen Was So Pretty Black Girl,So Soft, and,Clean,So Intelligent,I Kissed Her and She Just Went To Pieces In My Arms; As She Looked Right Through Me With Those Dark Eyes,Like Shook Me Out Of My Past Into My Future_
That Model She Set Out To Be Only She Wasn't So To Be Free;The Poem Was Mailed To Her In N Y _
1st 2 Poems To Intimate To Rewrite Lose Beauty In Meaning, # 3 Poem,Do Read On My DenAuthors,An Eye Into Future Of Reality!
____Dens Messen Up TYPING In Pieces...
A Poem Especially For Karen...
I Did Not Want ReallyWrite This Poem,Tis,
When It Comes To Me,I Write!Happiness Is
All IWanted For You;I ReallyCare For you!
YouAreSo Beautiful,You Are To MuchLike Me
There's 1 Real Difference Though,I Am Me,
IAm Free,This' How It's Got Ta Be!Try To
Understand;ILet You Come Into MyLife, You
Karen CouldDestroy My way Of Thinking,You
Would Not Be Able ToHandle Me!Because You
Are So Much Like Me Inside-In Mind! Again
You AreEverywhere But In Right Place!Then
If You NotReceived ThisPoem,You Will Then
ReadIt,My Published Books!YouWill Know Me
In Your Mind Like No Other Man Until Be
Until Day You Die!Why? Grow To Know Me,
Sign Of Trask;Fascinating,No Way! Why Be
Is It You're So Turned On To Me? May Be
Physical In 1 Sense--It Is Because I Have
Taken YouPlaces InYour Mind Where YouHave
Never Been!Conversation,Where No One Can_
Never Will Go! Until You There Were No
Other Women In Past Year;You Can't Tho
Believe It;Because I Identify With You
Karen On"Mental"Most Spiritual Plane,You
Weren't Even Aware! I Could Fall For You
So Hard,But I Can't,I Won't,I Got No Due
Choice But To Let Go!Karen You In No True
Way Weren't Meant ToHave Child!Take Good
Look Into Future:You Can Do It,For Good,
Tell Me What Do You See? DoesThe Light Be
ItHurt Your Eyes?Why Did I Tell You to Be
Careful? Even As You'd Left Tonite,You Do
Looked So Pretty In your New Clothes!You_
Sure,I Wanted To Give You Red Rose,But,Up
I Was Off Wall,As Usual Your Head Was Up
Your Ass!! I Call It Like It Is;I Know No
Other Way! I Am Survivor Of So Many Dam
F--ked Up Broken Dreams!I Know Where I Am
Have Been, Where I Am Going! Problem Is
You Karen(Baby) Won't Be There! Cut It Is
Yourself Off From Me,You Must, And It Is
I, TRASK From You I Will--Our Pathes Will
Cross One More Time Before The End; Until
Once Again You Will Have Kissed Me Again_
As You Turn, Look It Is Me, TRASK...
Tear's, TRASK c 1980/2003 TRASK
_Late That Summer Karen Called Me From
Hawaii;She Wanted To Come Back,Like Some
Kinda Nut She'd Gone There Make $2000,You
Can Surmise What She Was Dropping Off_
To Point I Looked . Her Model Photos Some
Years Past,Thought, Sad, Tears What Waste
Of Beauty All To Hell!!
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|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Excellent, emotional write.|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Tears here!!!!! I can feel the pain....
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i really like this new-sprung poetic vein...|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
i'm so sorry, TRASK
(((HUGS))) and hope love and life treat you better
|Reviewed by serenety L
|Trask. This is a complete new side of you. Moving away from politics to love. Great idea. I enjoyed reading this one, even the sad parts. Great write.
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Excellent observations, Trask! Well done! :) (((HUGS)))|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very powerful and emotional Trask!!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was very powerful and emotional Trask, excellently expressed,
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|TRASK,,This will find feelings one didn't even realize they owned. It left me wondering why beauty is so important to the eye. ~SH~|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Life can be very bittersweet, sometimes we only get what we need and not what we want. Good write Trask! ~Z~|