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  Field of Thunder
by Sara Coslett
Monday, July 14, 2003


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My heart is torn asunder
Standing out in a field of thunder
My arms are spread up to the sky
Me crying, why...oh why
Don’t deceive me, not here, not now
Yes, yes, yes, they’ll always look for a way...somehow
Just love me and leave me screaming for more
I beg you, I demand of you, this I implore
Stay with me now, please...just a little while longer
Your presence always makes me feel so much stronger
It is not him, the loverboy who makes me confused
I love him, but I always feel so abused
You are the one, my king, my sun
Show me the end to the needy one
He has a her, or perhaps it is a him
Chasing all over the internet as if on a whim
This person we’ll assume is a her
She’s cloaked in poetic myrrh
She thinks I am a moron so easily played
Hoping my love stories will leave him betrayed
But I see her standing over there on the side
With secret harmonies, hoping to be his bride
The truth will come out...eventually
Until then I’ll stand out in the rain...perpetually



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Reviewed by elois Masters (Reader) 7/17/2003
if it weren't for the rain, how'd I wash the back of my neck? The warm summer rain. There's more love in that. Sweet rain drops for you, love. sorry for your heart ache.
m
Reviewed by Angelica Young 7/16/2003
This is simply superb, Fantastic write and pic as well. :)

Love Tearz
Reviewed by jude forese 7/16/2003
where's there's lightening, there's thunder... heartfelt emotions...
Reviewed by Christine Morell 7/15/2003
Fantastic work, Sara
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 7/15/2003
Super as always!
Reviewed by David Knight 7/15/2003
Wonderful, words so well matched to the image too. I hope the truth does out!
David
Reviewed by serenety L 7/15/2003
An explosive mixture about people and emotions. Sad, but very well written.
Love
Nico
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/14/2003
lightning write filled with stormy feelings!!
Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader) 7/14/2003
this is full of electricity...nice work Super Girl
Reviewed by Regina Pounds 7/14/2003
The title attracted me because I love a thunderstorm (the picture is super!), but I do so hope this is fictional, dear Supergirl.
Well written!

Gina
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 7/14/2003
Leland, you dear man.
What a wonderful haiku
You wrote for me too.
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 7/14/2003
Dramatic pic and great write. Here's my cheer up.

One of these fine days
I'm gonna write a Haiku
Just to pleasure you
Reviewed by Lady Peg 7/14/2003
Oh Supergirl,
this one shook my blues for a moment.
{tears}}}}}
sometimes I hate love.. yea me that writes about it all the time.. It causes so much strss and pain and sorrow it is the one standing in the cloak..
{tears}
Corpis said mouse drowned still...
Hurracaine sweeping by....
This was excellent sweetie...
PJ
Reviewed by J. Murphy 7/14/2003
Wow! This is something else. If this is true I hope the best for you. Tough situation. J.
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