My heart is torn asunder
Standing out in a field of thunder
My arms are spread up to the sky
Me crying, why...oh why
Don’t deceive me, not here, not now
Yes, yes, yes, they’ll always look for a way...somehow
Just love me and leave me screaming for more
I beg you, I demand of you, this I implore
Stay with me now, please...just a little while longer
Your presence always makes me feel so much stronger
It is not him, the loverboy who makes me confused
I love him, but I always feel so abused
You are the one, my king, my sun
Show me the end to the needy one
He has a her, or perhaps it is a him
Chasing all over the internet as if on a whim
This person we’ll assume is a her
She’s cloaked in poetic myrrh
She thinks I am a moron so easily played
Hoping my love stories will leave him betrayed
But I see her standing over there on the side
With secret harmonies, hoping to be his bride
The truth will come out...eventually
Until then I’ll stand out in the rain...perpetually
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|Reviewed by elois Masters (Reader)
|if it weren't for the rain, how'd I wash the back of my neck? The warm summer rain. There's more love in that. Sweet rain drops for you, love. sorry for your heart ache.
|Reviewed by Angelica Young
|This is simply superb, Fantastic write and pic as well. :)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|where's there's lightening, there's thunder... heartfelt emotions...|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Fantastic work, Sara
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Super as always!|
|Reviewed by David Knight
|Wonderful, words so well matched to the image too. I hope the truth does out!
|Reviewed by serenety L
|An explosive mixture about people and emotions. Sad, but very well written.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|lightning write filled with stormy feelings!!|
|Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
|this is full of electricity...nice work Super Girl|
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|The title attracted me because I love a thunderstorm (the picture is super!), but I do so hope this is fictional, dear Supergirl.
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|Leland, you dear man.
What a wonderful haiku
You wrote for me too.
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Dramatic pic and great write. Here's my cheer up.
One of these fine days
I'm gonna write a Haiku
Just to pleasure you
|Reviewed by Lady Peg
this one shook my blues for a moment.
sometimes I hate love.. yea me that writes about it all the time.. It causes so much strss and pain and sorrow it is the one standing in the cloak..
Corpis said mouse drowned still...
Hurracaine sweeping by....
This was excellent sweetie...
|Reviewed by J. Murphy
|Wow! This is something else. If this is true I hope the best for you. Tough situation. J.|