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Our Love Is Ripe And Not It Must Decay
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Tuesday, July 15, 2003

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Nothing is new under the Sun
Pleasure swifts and pain lasts
Love blossoms for sometime
In the transient garden of heart
Until the drought of tragedy
Eradicates the seed of love
Until the tides of the ocean
Rinses its mark from the sand
For love is build above the sand
And not build above the rock
My love! Even if we love much
One-day we would part from Earth
The concluding bell of life tolls
Deeper than the sound of silence
Beyond this life, into the gates of death
For our love is ripe and now it must decay


Copyright 2002 Bhuwan Thapaliya



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Reviewed by serenety L 7/17/2003
Wonderful and touching love poem.
S
Reviewed by Marlene Dawn 7/16/2003
Very deep thoughts written excellent.

*Marlene*
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan 7/15/2003
Deep and insightful... thanks for sharing..
Jenni
Reviewed by Erica Ivory 7/15/2003
that one line says so much.. makes me think. Excellent
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 7/15/2003
Excellant and deeply profound Bhuwan. Your poetry is always so inspiring no matter what the subject matter, and I enjoy every piece I get the chance to read!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Christine Morell 7/15/2003
A wonderfully profound poem, Bhuwan
~Chrissie
Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader) 7/15/2003
Such a deep and beautiful sentiment, so much wisdom behind the words, VERY WELL DONE, Bhuwan! This is not a "romatically popular" way to present your thoughts, especially to the "hearts and flowers" traditinalists,but, you know, sometimes the road less traveled is the ONLY road that makes sense for some ideas... Love this bit:
"The concluding bell of life tolls
Deeper than the sound of silence
Beyond this life, into the gates of death
For our love is ripe and now it must decay"

A challenging write, well done and I salute you!
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 7/15/2003
7-15-03

Excellent__

It Was Rotten To Begin With!

TRASK
Reviewed by Zenith Elliott 7/15/2003
Excellent Bhuwan as always your unique style prevails!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/15/2003
This is very deep and unique poem Bhuwan!!
You inspired me with this one!!

Love
Tinka
Reviewed by David Knight 7/15/2003
Loved it! Not the normal way to look at it but it cannot be denied.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/15/2003
This was outstanding, and spoke such truth, that just echos in my heart, wonderfully written, loved it,

Reindeer
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 7/15/2003
Bhuwan, and the decay seems so tragic. Can't there be a redeeming feature to all this. The words stagger the imaagination. Your friend Bill
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 7/15/2003
Outstanding Bhuwan, a very deep and unique poem.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 7/15/2003
Bhuwan, excellent poem. The physical will decay but the spiritual grows and flourishes.
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 7/15/2003
An unusual concept,and from the decay new growth emerges perhaps?
As always your poems insite thought and inspire me to ponder and wonder.Well done.
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