|Reviewed by serenety L
|Wonderful and touching love poem.
|Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
|Very deep thoughts written excellent.
|Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
|Deep and insightful... thanks for sharing..
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|that one line says so much.. makes me think. Excellent|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Excellant and deeply profound Bhuwan. Your poetry is always so inspiring no matter what the subject matter, and I enjoy every piece I get the chance to read!
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|A wonderfully profound poem, Bhuwan
|Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
|Such a deep and beautiful sentiment, so much wisdom behind the words, VERY WELL DONE, Bhuwan! This is not a "romatically popular" way to present your thoughts, especially to the "hearts and flowers" traditinalists,but, you know, sometimes the road less traveled is the ONLY road that makes sense for some ideas... Love this bit:
"The concluding bell of life tolls
Deeper than the sound of silence
Beyond this life, into the gates of death
For our love is ripe and now it must decay"
A challenging write, well done and I salute you!
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
It Was Rotten To Begin With!
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Excellent Bhuwan as always your unique style prevails!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This is very deep and unique poem Bhuwan!!
You inspired me with this one!!
|Reviewed by David Knight
|Loved it! Not the normal way to look at it but it cannot be denied.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was outstanding, and spoke such truth, that just echos in my heart, wonderfully written, loved it,
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Bhuwan, and the decay seems so tragic. Can't there be a redeeming feature to all this. The words stagger the imaagination. Your friend Bill|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Outstanding Bhuwan, a very deep and unique poem.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Bhuwan, excellent poem. The physical will decay but the spiritual grows and flourishes.|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|An unusual concept,and from the decay new growth emerges perhaps?
As always your poems insite thought and inspire me to ponder and wonder.Well done.