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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
7/21/2003 |
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| you know my heart....this ia beautiful the order of your words provoked something deep could it be understanding........It moves mountains thank you |
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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
7/20/2003 |
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| thank you, richard...I read Mitzi's Piece also...(Highly recommend, Jackson,Mitzi)& you have answered beautifully as one can...it, that work did bring chills and sorrow and yet, as you say, 'sorry', not enough...IT SHOULD BE SAID, but it would NEVER, EVER be enough...and to be so moved as you were to in your way, write of your own pain for her, for all who suffered the history of racism, and from..You have written a humbled kindness, so honestly meant that it MEANS SOMETHING...no, no sorry could ever be enough, but my friend, words like yours, here, help....in my opinion, it, they ARE SO SINCERE AND SO GUT FELT...Thank YOU!!! I, you have a heart within this that is profoundly versed in tribute...Oh, richard, Thank You...much, much!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
7/17/2003 |
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"...she speaks
anger
from ridicule
degradation
of living
without hope
to the memories
slaved..."
Perpetuating misery...profound lines, Richard. Well done. |
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| Reviewed by serenety L |
7/17/2003 |
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A very interesting piece Richard.
Enjoyed reading it.
S |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
7/17/2003 |
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Hi Richard;
Such a profound write.
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
7/17/2003 |
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This was powerful, and so moving, excellently written,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/17/2003 |
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Strong powerful write Richard!!
Love
Tinka |
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