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| Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister |
7/18/2003 |
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Excellent my friend..
Mister |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
7/18/2003 |
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| Believer in love. Excellent write. Beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
7/17/2003 |
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| Perhaps we forget that nothing lasts forever, minute by minute we're changing. Enjoy love while it's yours, take comfort in love's memory when/if it fades. Great poem, Reindeer! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/17/2003 |
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| better to be loved and not forgotten... excellent write... |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
7/17/2003 |
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Simply awesome!
Beautiful picture... |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
7/17/2003 |
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Beautifully written, like the picture also.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
7/17/2003 |
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Reindeer,
Oh this one is so beautiful and bittersweet,
a perfect poem.
"His love is a dagger in my heart,
That flashes like lightening,
Even when we are apart…
Mile upon mile,
Yet the distance means nothing,
For like a wizard,
He casts his spell,
With sweet words,
And I am doomed to live in this hell,
That is his love for me… "
PJ
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| Reviewed by . ShyPoet1 |
7/17/2003 |
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Deeply beautiful! I'm feeling this!
Shy |
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| Reviewed by J. Murphy |
7/17/2003 |
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Reindeer,
I like your use of winter as the backdrop for this poem--depicting the seperation from love as winter is often associated with. Nice work. J. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
7/17/2003 |
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| Beautiful work, Retta. I've missed reading you. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/17/2003 |
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| Beautiful sad write. |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
7/17/2003 |
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Well Retta,
Looks like it's all
been said...
Fabulous write...
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
7/17/2003 |
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| So sad and weepy. You did a nice job with this. |
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| Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) |
7/17/2003 |
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| Very melancholy write, my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Cynthia Pagliolo |
7/17/2003 |
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| An excellent write! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/17/2003 |
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Oh Retta why are on the same level today for sure.........this is one of those I could be the author myself...Gad dammit why???
Why doe loving some one hurt so bloody much??? I feel for you my friend.....be sure of that!!
Warm love and Hugs to you!!
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
7/17/2003 |
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| Oh, Retta...the poignancy and unmitigated yearning in your piece pierces the heart and mind. Sweet Reindeer, never put your hand on that blade, again. The uniqueness of you must stay until your time comes. Think, ponder write, and live. :) |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
7/17/2003 |
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| pat yourself on the back, this is an excellent poem |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
7/17/2003 |
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| Oh Retta, how I love your work, this is breathtaking. |
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| Reviewed by Anastacia Lee |
7/17/2003 |
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Wonderful write! Had me into it throgh every word!
Be well
Ana Lee |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
7/17/2003 |
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| beautiful write, Reindeer. The picture explains everything. |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
7/17/2003 |
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Reindeer, what an excellent, feeling write! I felt this one....
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
7/17/2003 |
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| This is beautiful, and I really needed to read something like this before I go off to War. |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
7/17/2003 |
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| Retta, first of all the picture is outstanding! If you mind let me know, but I have saved it into my picture gallery to use later. Sometimes seems impossible, to make a dream come true. Isn't that where dreams come from though, the impossible? In friendship. Bill |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
7/17/2003 |
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an excellent write My friend,
lets hope thta's all it is
William |
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| Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) |
7/17/2003 |
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Excellent and more beautiful Retta ....
Thanks for sharing ... |
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