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A Little Piece of Star
by Ron (sketchman) Axelson

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Give me a little piece of star,
but I donít want to travel too far

I would like a celestial playground
one with a merry go round

You can go with me if you dare
I will treat you with the best of care

Weíll take a little star dust
so we can have a powerful thrust

Oh, did you say, move over you jerk,
I canít hold on to your star any longer

Well, the next time I will bring a girl
who is much stronger.

Ron Axelson
© 7/17/03
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Reviewed by Patricia Sanders 2/18/2008
Your poetry is wonderful, especially along with the drawings...
It reminds of Shel Silverstein
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/5/2007
Once again, art and verses form a fine marriage, Ron. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Southern Comfort 5/23/2007
You are so adorable! I adore your poetry and art work! HUGS! SC
Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett 5/20/2007
THIS IS UNIQUE AND LOVELY.
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 5/3/2007
LOL! L:ove it ! Love it! Love it! YOu need a Warrior LOL

Great poem Ron!
Love the sketch... got to have boobiessss.... What cute characters...
Let's jump on the star- sounds like 1 of my recent poems, 2 thoughts alike...
I think mine is like 12 or so down... I forgot the name...
Stay Happy and Healthy!
and POsitive!
Warmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
Reviewed by serenety L 8/5/2003
That's a cute one. Made me laugh. Pic as well.
S
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 7/22/2003
A nice rhyming artistic piece of work Ron. G
Reviewed by Trixie Love 7/20/2003
Hi Ron,
Long time no see...
Oh this is such a cute
write...
I needed the giggle...

Have a happy day Ron....

Trixie :)
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 7/20/2003
OH my Lawd!! Boobs huh! :op

Love the message also Ron.....Great write, ty, Dani
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/20/2003
Ron you are tooooooooooooooo much!;-)
This is a great combo poem and pic, get rid of her I'll carry your star hon, won't we have fun;-) Smooooooooooooooooooooooooch!luv ya;-)
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 7/19/2003
How sweet a little piece of star could be good !
Reviewed by Lynn Barry 7/19/2003
Once again you show your genius for the strangely bizarre way of expressing deep emotion that readers can relate to and get a smile or laugh from, too...cuzz you're good...
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 7/18/2003
Oh this is funny. Glad i stopped by tonight. So nice to go to bed with a smile on your face. Love the pic too
Reviewed by Nancy D. 7/18/2003
The picture alone gave me a smile, enjoyed the poem also.

Nancy
Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader) 7/18/2003
Brought a smile, sir.
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 7/18/2003
Super write...seem my tracker is down again. Thanks for the smile and great art.
Hugs, Trish.
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 7/18/2003
Cute write, Ron! I needed the smile!
Thanks,
Jill :)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/18/2003
Okay I am smiling!!!!

That poor girl....those boobs are so heavy no wonder she wants to fall down to "evil!!"

Thank goodness I am more "balanced"......soooo mister... I might just hold on for ever if its my turn to hold on to "your" star!!!!!

So come back here and give me a chance....to proof my "balance"........hehehehehe

Enjoyed reading you again....look :)))))
I am still smiling!!

Love
Tinka
Reviewed by jing javier 7/18/2003
you sure can put smile on my face! great job!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/18/2003
Cute write and drawing, Sketchman! Excellent on both! :) (((HUGS)))
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/18/2003
This was great..I loved it, very well done, made me smile!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 7/18/2003
LOL Great write!
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 7/18/2003
Love those Boobs!
Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra 7/18/2003
Wow! Excellent poem and wonderful image!
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 7/17/2003
That's me,very strong.
I love the sketch and the poem it is really cute ....just like
YOU.
sssmmmmmmmmmmmmooooootttttttccccccchhhhh
Reviewed by jude forese 7/17/2003
she looks like she's strong in the right place... very cool poem & pic...
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan 7/17/2003
Lmao...love both the sketch and the poem...
Hugs
Jenni
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 7/17/2003
hahaha...those are cute boobies, Ron. [smiles]
Reviewed by Linda Hill 7/17/2003
Loved the poem and the
sketch...Thanks for
giving me a smile tonite!

~~Linda~~
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 7/17/2003
hahaha Sketchman love the sketch and the poem [Smiles}
PJ
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 7/17/2003
I'm with ya, Sketchman! Love the message!
In Spirit,
Bear

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