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The Changing Room
by The Gentle Man
Friday, July 18, 2003

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sometimes passion occurs in public places......smile

In the changing room
at the mall, she feels his
hot eyes on her as she removes
her red lace bra
Can he see me through such a tiny
crack she wonders?

She starts to fully close the curtain but then stops and smiles as a lustful thought enters her mind
She feels a familiar ache between
her silky thighs

She looks into his onyx eyes and
squeezes her full firm mounds of
passion with both hands
Her soft fingertips gently pulling her hard buds

She licks her crimson lips and smiles again at the wanting stranger
She lifts one of her ample breasts to her warm wet mouth
and flicks her hot tongue across
her nipple

The man shifts his angle for a wider view
Now she can see his whole body
He begins to rub his crotch
His manhood hard and throbbing
beneath his jeans

The woman's heart is racing
and she can barely breathe
as she lowers her silk thong panties
The stranger begins to stroke
faster

She spreads her velvet thighs wide and puts two fingers in her mouth
She then pushes her wet fingers
into her hot chamber of ecstasy
The man's eyes get wider and
he starts to perspire

Deeper and deeper her fingers explore every fold and crevice
of her tunnel to paradise
She softly caresses her love button with her moist fingerips while plunging her lady fingers
in and out of her heaven
until liquid ecstasy pours down
her trembling thighs

The stranger's own passion violently erupts in his shorts
She winks at him and he winks back at her, smiling and walks
up to the door of the changing
room and says, " that was wonderful, see you at home honey."
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Reviewed by serenety L 8/2/2003
I know it is a mistake to always order clothes by catalogue. This poem made me change my mind. Will go shopping next week.
Love
S
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 7/19/2003
Steamy and sizzling
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/18/2003
Wow!! enjoyable read indeed!!
Shit its warm in here!!
Ted....you a star!!!

love
Tinka
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 7/18/2003
gee it's awful hot in here. I like the ending
Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader) 7/18/2003
Fine erotic work, sir.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 7/18/2003
Whewwwwwwwwwwww gentleman,
This one is very excellent
PJ
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 7/18/2003
Nicely done. I'm worried about Ted, however. [smiles]
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/18/2003
hot stuff! (I don't NEED to be hot today; it's supposed to be 100 degrees here in northcentral texas! Supposed to be hot all weekend before a cool front brings some relief next week! :( ) (((HUGS))) Excellent write, Gentle Man!
Reviewed by Denise Edwards 7/18/2003
Absolutely great!! With a wife like her, who
needs strip joints! This is how to keep the spice in a marriage! Super job, G-MAN!

Denise
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 7/18/2003
This is good, GM! I don't like those changing rooms either! Maybe I should put on a show like Ted! LOL...
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 7/18/2003

Sometimes in public, it is the excitement that is the thrill :) Very hot.

Thanks,
Emilie
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 7/18/2003
Now this is a hot orginal write! Wow.
Reviewed by Aamie Burnley 7/18/2003
... playfully hot.
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight* Authors & Creations 7/18/2003
Breathtaking and wonderfully provocative, as always. The conclusion is simply genial!
Reviewed by David Knight 7/18/2003
Love and Lust, the perfect partners!
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 7/18/2003
WOW! It's hooooootttttttt in here! I just love it when matrimony and the evils of life can't stand in the way of erotica between husband and wife. Somehow it reknews those vows everytime it happens. Loved this! ~SH~
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 7/18/2003
My wife refuses to change in them because she thinks somebody is watching via camera or otherwise, I don't mind if that is the case, I always just for fun, pull it out and shake it at them, so far no takers.
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