|Reviewed by serenety L
|I know it is a mistake to always order clothes by catalogue. This poem made me change my mind. Will go shopping next week.
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Steamy and sizzling|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Wow!! enjoyable read indeed!!
Shit its warm in here!!
Ted....you a star!!!
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|gee it's awful hot in here. I like the ending|
|Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
|Fine erotic work, sir.|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
This one is very excellent
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Nicely done. I'm worried about Ted, however. [smiles]|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|hot stuff! (I don't NEED to be hot today; it's supposed to be 100 degrees here in northcentral texas! Supposed to be hot all weekend before a cool front brings some relief next week! :( ) (((HUGS))) Excellent write, Gentle Man!|
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|Absolutely great!! With a wife like her, who
needs strip joints! This is how to keep the spice in a marriage! Super job, G-MAN!
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|This is good, GM! I don't like those changing rooms either! Maybe I should put on a show like Ted! LOL...
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Sometimes in public, it is the excitement that is the thrill :) Very hot.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Now this is a hot orginal write! Wow.|
|Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
|... playfully hot.|
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|Breathtaking and wonderfully provocative, as always. The conclusion is simply genial!|
|Reviewed by David Knight
|Love and Lust, the perfect partners!|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|WOW! It's hooooootttttttt in here! I just love it when matrimony and the evils of life can't stand in the way of erotica between husband and wife. Somehow it reknews those vows everytime it happens. Loved this! ~SH~|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|My wife refuses to change in them because she thinks somebody is watching via camera or otherwise, I don't mind if that is the case, I always just for fun, pull it out and shake it at them, so far no takers.|