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Heartache
by Erin Lynn Tubb

Friday, July 18, 2003

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This is a poem that I wrote about one of my boyfriends.

I see you walking towards me, and I'm so filled with joy that I think that I'll burst.
I run to meet you, smiling and happy.
I look up at you grinning and full of happiness, even though I can see the annoyance and hatred in your eyes as you gaze down at me.
I hear the words "I Love You" come out of my mouth, Yet I don't realize that I am the one who said it.
Your eyes narrow and darken in anger and your lips curve into a cruel sneer.
You reach into my chest and rip my still beating heart out of the jagged, gaping hole created.
You then throw it to the ground and stomp on it, grinding it into pieces under your heel.
You turn and walk away without saying a word and without looking back.
I fall to my knees beside the remains of my broken heart, a single tear trailing down my cold cheek.
I pick up the tiny pieces and try to put them back together.
It is of no use, my heart has been shattered to many times in the past to be fit back together, even once more.
I let the pieces of my heart fall from my hand, allowing the wind to scatter them far and wide, never to be found again.
I get to my feet and walk away, with a cold empty feeling in my chest.
I feel my soul shrivel and blacken from all the pain and anger I've suffered until it can no longer be recognized as a soul, but something cold, harsh, and unfeeling.


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Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 7/19/2003
Wow this definitely spoke with volume! Such a bittersweet tear maker write!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 7/18/2003
Sad but true write!!!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 7/18/2003
So bittersweet and heart wrenching.
PJ
Reviewed by Rhea MacDonald (Reader) 7/18/2003
My daughter,
this is a very good piece, and yes, i know who it is about....you are really maturing in your writing...I really like this piece. Keep posting your work. Love you always, Mom
Reviewed by David Knight 7/18/2003
Sadness indeed! Maybe he just wasn't good enough for you?
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/18/2003
Heartwrenching write, Erin; thanks for sharing this sad write! :( (((HUGS)))
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