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My Light (edited)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Sunday, July 20, 2003

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My eyes do not see all that's to be seen,
It seems I view life through a hazy screen;
Stretching my mind's eye to figure all
I stand hunched; I stand so small

My eyes do not see all that's to be seen,
Just faint lines with doubt in between.
The loveliness of this world, I need to vision
Through my eye, not someone's revision

My eyes do not see all that's to be seen,
Nor can decode what any can mean
But my heart stretches to conceive
All what my light refuses to receive.

(c) Karla Dorman
---------------------------------------------------------------
"My Light," in its final shape, was re-
vised by Nevine Al Seidi, the editorial
poet of "Disabailability," the poetry
book we are working on. "Disabailabi-
lity" will be a book of verse on disa-
bility by myself and Karen. Nevine is
coaching us through this with daily
prompts and technical guidance. So,
Nevine Al Seidi is the director of the
book, while poems are written by my-
self and my twin, Karen.

I thought this was a necessary expla-
nation.

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Reviewed by Sarah Tagert 7/21/2003
this an amazing write!
Reviewed by William Heffner 7/21/2003
My God is Omnipotent, He makes no mistakes, so disability is not possible. The world sees position, while God and all those connected to Him see potential.

You are beautiful and your best is yet to come.

Thanks for the preview

Keeping the Faith and Shining The Light Of Jesus, the same, yesterday, today and forever.

Officer William Heffner
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 7/21/2003
You're wonderful, just as you are. Don't ever change for anyone!
Beautiful write,
With Love,
Jill :)
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 7/20/2003
wonderful, I read this twice
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 7/20/2003
Stay the way you are. You're a lovely person.
[[[[[[[[Hugs]]]]]]]]]
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 7/20/2003
Beautiful write.
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight* Authors & Creations 7/20/2003
This is outstanding, dear, wise, talented friend.
(((((((((((((Karla)))))))))))))
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 7/20/2003
7-20-3

What Cannot Be seen With The(Your) Eyes The Mind Already Knows!!

TRASK
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 7/20/2003
Wonderful work. Congratulations to you both.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/20/2003
I enjoy your poetry......stick to your own self.....and we will read Karla's work that is unique in its own right Okay!!

It is good to learn more.......but stay yourself as well...the persomn we learned to love and respect!!

Love
Tinka
Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader) 7/20/2003
Karla, I think I am very satisfied with the result here. My Light is a unique poem in any literature. And I am very happy we worked on the music ( rhythm, meter and rhyme) without altering the mood and the vision. Read it aloud a dozen times, and see how this feels in the end.. Is it Karla's, or like someone suggests: Nevine's ( who honestly could not produce this poem in a million years.. just a foreign experience to me..)
When I read it aloud, I cannot relate to it personally, but I am filled with awe at the perseverant tone of struggle and optimism. The spirit of a unique voice echoes in every line.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 7/20/2003
Karla, you can trust yourself, if you start to rely too much on someone else the work will become hers not yours. I like your poem very much but I have always enjoyed the distinctive voice of your poetry.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/20/2003
i like it; each time it gets better and better! outstanding write! ((((HUGS)))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :)
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