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I Saw A Girl
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Yesterday, I saw a girl
In the vegetable field
Chasing the cows away
With a sugarcane stick
She was lovely
Lovely as a dream
And I was mesmerized
By her heavenly gleam
Her smile
Was akin to the morning Sun
Mild, soothing and exquisite
Like a lotus in the pond
The more I saw her
The more I loved her
And I was lost within
The grandeur of her
Conflict arose
Between my heart and mind
But my soul intervened
And healed the transient sore
The spirit of perpetual love
Drove my emotional cart and
Took me adjacent to her
She was sitting and peeling
The sugarcane stick naked
With those prehensile teeth
Of her, under the baking Sun
She was lost in her own world
And she noticed me not, I as an
Obedient child disturbed her not
But silently waited for her thrust
Suddenly she turned her head
Towards me with utmost surprise
And scrutinized me, head to toe
From her extra precautious eyes
Sincerely, she shed a warm smile
And at that very moment, I forgot
Myself from me, upon her revelation
That exemplified my hearts gratification
She said, “ Hello! Who are you?”
I told her that I am her admirer
And my heart dragged me to you
For I have never seen a girl as beautiful as you
Oh! It is my beauty
That dragged you to me
She questioned me back
And whispered me not to be fooled
By the beauty
Because genuine beauty
Lies in the heart
And not in the physical form
Confused was I,
Upon hearing that from her
And I nodded my head
With appreciation
But told her that
I have already lost
My heart to her
And I wouldn’t decamp from her
She laughed aloud
Like the ravenous thunder
And told me that
I am a fool to fall in love with a stranger
I abruptly retorted that
Even our parents were strangers
Before they knew each other
But today we are their children
She smiled back
And gave me a warm gesture
And I could feel her heartbeat
Rising like the salubrious zephyr
She caressed my head
And asked me, “ Is your love for real?”
Will you forever love me the way I am? And
What will happen to me, if you change your mind?
Upon hearing that from her
I replied that I don’t believe my mind
But I believe my heart and my heart says that
I was made for loving you the way you are
Suddenly she grasped me
With those slender arms of her
And beneath the naked sun
We made love the whole daylong

Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by serenety L
This is excellent. You painted such a beautiful pic of meeting the right person, falling for her and getting lost in your love.
Reviewed by Hiren Shah
You are an MRP- Master of Romantic poetry. Though simpler, this is a thoroughlly enjoyable poem. So the sugercane worker turned out to be a sugarplum? In the two most important decisions of career or girlfriendwife, the heart should overule the head; all big decisions according to psychologist Segmund Freud

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
This was so lovely, just an enchanting poem, I loved it,

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Bhuwan, this is such a beautiful poem! Bill
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
<HUGE SIGH> Oh my Bhuwan this is EXQUISITE, so romantic, passionate and full of emotional depth!!!!
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Hi Bhuwan,
This is soooo romantic....

Beautiful write...

Trixie :)
Reviewed by E T Waldron
A sweet and lovely romantic story Bhuwan, told with a whimsical and charming touch. Superb!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Wonderfully romantic and passionate.
Reviewed by Christine Morell
A wonderfully romantic poem. Excellent, Bhuwan.
Reviewed by David Knight
Lovely words, questioning beauty and love.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Now this is called love......blinded by every emotion and heart beat....Bhuwan you took my breath away with this pure beauty!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
Wow, You are a true romantic. :-) This is beautiful.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Wow! Bhuwan, this is wonderful!!!! So many beautiful thoughts and phrases, told so gently and romantically. So, ...sigh, I must reread.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Sigh!!!!!!!!!Romantic Poet you have done it again...
"Upon hearing that from her
I replied that I donít believe my mind
But I believe my heart and my heart says that
I was made for loving you the way you are
Suddenly she grasped me
With those slender arms of her
And beneath the naked sun
We made love the whole daylong "
Hugs love n peace bravo!!

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