|Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Storms shall never cease I fear lass, yet peace still commands them to be still! Ah, but peace, where hideth she this day?
Keep the faith...and know that peace will reveal herself in due time lass, of this I am certain, for she is the last curtain call to every storm!
Good writing, good to see you back Jose!
Rodney Evan Bohen
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so well written, I loved this,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the storm always flows within our blood... superb pyschological tour de force...|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
So great to see your work again!
This is one write I can really at current time relate 100% to! Such a EXCELLANT PIECE to describe what we sometimes feel and go thru more often than not!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|i am feeling the same way you are, josie; i can definitely relate to this write! outstanding write; good to see you here again; we've missed you here at the den! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. :(|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
so glad to see you posting again! welcome back! (((HUGS)))
lately, this is how i feel...excellent write
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
|I can feel the tension and apprehension in and feeling of submission in this.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Have missed you so much. Gripping poem, can feel the frustration and pain and numbness all at once. Love you Lady.|
|Reviewed by J. Murphy
|You have coined a great phrase and painted its picture well. Great phrase and great verse. J.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|well written...clap clap....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Enigmatic write with exceptional title,come back Josie!;-)|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Hey, missed ya. glad you're back with your exceptional posts|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Excellent to see you again Josie...Love the title!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Wonderful to see you posting again. This is your usual exceptional work, Josie. Bravo.|
|Reviewed by Jennifer Hardy
I just found out about this site, and I am so impressed with your expessions...
You can really feel your feelings in all your words...what a talent.....this will carry you throughout what ever life throws your way...believe in yourself.
I miss you....feel for you....and hope you know that you can call on me...if ever i can help in anyway...
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|there you are! great poem and even better to see your name out there again|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Well written Josie!!
Missed you girl!!
|Reviewed by Leysa Lowery
|You have described what I thought was indescribable. Limbo gauze ... so well done.|