|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|The love…. I
Had left with you behind
Has moved…. A
Mile ahead in my absence
Won’t blame you, my love
For…. I…. am
Crucified by my own ill fate
Will try to catch the love
Flown in my little absence
Domicile of no return
If I. …Succeed
I will forever remain with you
If I. …Don’t succeed
Then I will pray for your bliss
Have loved you
Have understood you
Have understood you
I have loved you
This is my favorite by far.. Brilliantly penned.
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Excellent, captivating write.
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Really, you amaze me.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Stunning write Bhuwan....You have keen perceptions about all things in life;-)!|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|This one is special, deeply touching Bhuwan. you have such wisdom for your years.|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|A wonderful piece, Bhuwan. Excellent.
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Oh my this piece is the ULTIMATE MOVING EXPERIENCE VIA POETRY!!!!
Oh my how you have moved and touched me this day, for here you have said exactly what I wanted to say to someone long ago but alas I could never find the words in those moments!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Beautiful piece of writing!|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Lovely write and wonderful expression.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|This one hits like thunderbolt, Bhuwan. Striking, is the word... and are the thoughts this poem provokes.|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|My friend no truer meaning in words have ever hit home with me on this board. I tell you what, love is very important, but you had better seek to understand your love moreso than love your love. Because if you don't seek to understand, you and your love may not last. And check this out. Even if your love doesn't seek to understand you, you had better seek to understand your love.
What a moving piece of work here. Like I said it hit home with me. take care/ G
|Reviewed by jude forese