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Tippy toe in graveyard.
by Kay P M- Devenish

Wednesday, July 23, 2003

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On the grave of 'Long Ago'
gingerly trod tippy toe
carefully
lest you should know
that I tresspassed..... above.

Under shade
I wispered low,
this secret
that
'I miss you so'
but silently
kept tears of woe
lest woke I
corpse
.....of love.




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Reviewed by Kate Clifford 7/24/2003
Fantastic write!
Reviewed by Steve Ralph 7/24/2003
this is fantastic Kay i really love this poem
your pommy pal steve
Reviewed by jude forese 7/23/2003
some corpses are still full of life...
Reviewed by The Gentle Man 7/23/2003
Kay this is very well crafted indeed! I love the metaphors you use and the way it flows....Masterfully written!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 7/23/2003
Wow Kay! This is great poetry
You da woman!
Smoooooooooooooooooo00000000000000CH!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/23/2003
Your talent lights up the Den, when you write like this;-)!Splendid Kay!
Reviewed by Christine Morell 7/23/2003
One word..excellent!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 7/23/2003
Oooo this is wonderful spinetingling verses Kay...a most awesome write indeed!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 7/23/2003
(((kay)))

YIPE--chilling, thought provoking

well done! a beaut of a write!

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

or, as you said, "bloody fantastic!" :)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/23/2003
Though provoking!!
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 7/23/2003
Excellent capture of heartfelt loss.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/23/2003
Oh so powerfully written, This is one I can relate to so very well, excellent!

Reindeer
Reviewed by David Knight 7/23/2003
Superb tale of a missing love!
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 7/23/2003
I hate to tell you what I have witnessed in a graveyard, and it still didn't wake the dead. Well done, shhhhhhhh.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 7/23/2003
An awesome write, Kay! This was well-done!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
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