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ToU Perfectionist
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Thursday, July 24, 2003

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It's only a perfect world through the eyes viewing through the hole. dON'T read any further if you don't like pure gut expression. This isn't pointed at anyone in particular. Blink/

I love perfection,
it's just helps lifes correction.
But I don't live in this realm.
My chances here are very slim.


You are you,
and I am I.
I'll let you live,
If you let me live.
Don't come around trying to intimidate,
Because it will end up being illegitimate.
I know my vices,
just like I know that I'll put you on ices.


I'm a rough tough around the edges person,
I might even get to cursing.


There's a thin line,
that's between me and your behind,
so try to be more kind,
and you will find,
joy in your nice perfect worry if its perfect world.


Do you understand what's coming out of my write?
If not then stay off my site!


I move on regardless,
and I'm not heartless.


I care about mistakes and perfection.
But believe me it will be to my own detection.
Not your perfection.


Blieve it!
Nothing stops me!
Not perfection,
not mistakes,
Nothing,
but death.


Even then I might rise up and affect your perfect health.


Blink!
I'm not going anywhere!


G


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haRD TO KILL!

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Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 7/24/2003
Everyone I felt like removing this because I feel that it intimidates. I just wanted to help myself and others like me who have a problem with our writing. I wanted to let everyone know that we want be intimidated. I know some members who get hurt so bad they feel like quitting. G
Reviewed by serenety L 7/24/2003
I think I do understand what's coming out of your write. And I enjoy it very much.
Nico
Reviewed by E. Richardson 7/24/2003
This is well put...I like this. Perfection is a twisty thing...what I consider perfect, may be chaos to you. To me, a perfect piece of verse is one that touches another in someway. You have done that with this piece.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/24/2003
Your not perfect...nobody is?
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 7/24/2003
Grady RIGHT ON!!!!
I am once again having some real severe problems with some racist neighbors and this excellant piece helped to harden even more my resolve!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 7/24/2003
Good, don't let perfectionists intimidate you! God dont make junk and each of us is unique and priceless.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/24/2003
This was excellent Grady, Loved what you had to say here!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 7/24/2003
Your not perfect, but then who is?
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 7/24/2003
*grin* If a writer quit writing because somebody didn't like what was written,,there would be no writers after the first word. Just can't let it bother ya! Keep writing! ~SH~
Reviewed by Linda Hill 7/24/2003
Everyone has their own
style of writing and
that is their right. If
someone don't like it
one click will get them
off the page. Thats how
I feel about mine. I know
not everyones going to like
what I write. It don't bother
me because I know someone out
there will. Keep writing Grady.
Sometimes your writes make me
smile and some touch me. Don't
worry about the ones who only
want to find fault. Just be
yourself.
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