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Inhale...Mmmmmm
by Marilyn Seray

Thursday, July 24, 2003

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Take me to the edge of the world
to sit on a dune with my feet in
the sand and watch one puffy
cloud stretch it’s hand out to
play tag with the sun

I’ll climb the rocks that jut in and out
while in a boat, hoards of tourists with
their binoculars and cameras around
their necks in position hoping that
they’ll spot a whale

They wave, and I wave back

If I were a whale, I’d lie on my side
and spray them with water from
my blowhole to the tune of “Whatcha
lookin’ at”

I love the taste of the salty mist in the
air as the gentle waves flap against
the rocks in sync with the dock bell

I love watching the ocean chase the
sand by tip-toeing in and out; teasing
it with it’s shimmering sequence

Oh…here right now I feel myself settling
into a peaceful trance

I hear the dock bell slowly fade to a
light dong while I enjoy the quiet
company of my solitude


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Reviewed by William Bonilla 7/30/2003
Absolutly beautiful
An exellent write

William
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 7/27/2003
This has a relaxing feel to it, I wish I had some waterfront property and could look at the ocean everyday
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 7/27/2003
Incredibly beautiful, Marilyn. I love your poetry.
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 7/25/2003
This was a truly beautiful inhale, but can I exhale now? ;O)
Such beautiful imagery, and since I think I was a creature of the water in a past life because I LOVE the water this write fit me just right!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/25/2003
This was beautiful, I loved this wonderful poem,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/25/2003
great write, marilyn! :) enjoyed~ (((HUGS)))
Reviewed by The Gentle Man 7/25/2003
sounds like such a beautiful and serene place to be.....loved it Marilyn!
Reviewed by Christine Morell 7/25/2003
Absolutely wonderful imagery..I love this, Excellent.
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/24/2003
this was a heavenly write Marilyn.......I am sure God was sitting right next to you.....watching your every move.....dear Lord this was really very beautiful,peaceful and heavenly!!

Love
tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 7/24/2003
Thank you for this beautiful moment! LOL about the whale :-)
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 7/24/2003
Makes me feel peaceful, thanks.

Love, JC xoxoxo
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan 7/24/2003
Ahhh...so peaceful.....
Jenni
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 7/24/2003
I tried it but I never inhaled.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 7/24/2003
Oh Marylin,
Love the imagery this is so
beautiful .............
{{SMILES}}}}
PJ
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 7/24/2003
You made it sound so relaxing
Have a great night and day tomorrow....
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 7/24/2003
Excellent write....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 7/24/2003
Very Nice Marilyn!!

Jack
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/24/2003
Love the imagery, like you I love the ocean, and its surroundings.Wonderful poem ah to be a whale;-)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 7/24/2003
Niiiiiiiiice riiiiiiide. Love'd it.
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