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Kay P M- Devenish

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The Silent Song Birds
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Song birds sing everyday... or do they? Fanny May loved being awakened to the sound of the singing birds, except for one morning when their songs fell silent.......  
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Too many.(written in late 80's under my early pen name 'Sarah')
by Kay P M- Devenish

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Too many 'if's'
too many 'when's'
too many 'sorry's'
'Never agains'
too many promises
too many lies
far too many
'one more tries'.

How many were there
before I knew
speak louder

than promises
DO ?


( too MANY!)

p.s. Thank you Bobbie yes it was spelling error...thanks for pointing it out,I changed it.Must have been rushing too much,sorry folks.

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Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Kay, this is very good, just a small correction, in the first line is it supposed to be too many? Otherwise it a great write.
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Good the point..
Reviewed by Erica Ivory
I hate promises... This is a great write.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Perfect write....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Oh Yes, I understand all to well, This was excellent,

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Wonderful Kay! Terse and true to the point, Excellent write!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
to the point!!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
You are so right!!!!!!
In Spirit,
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*
Thanks for these words of wisdom Kay.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Perfection in a few words!
Reviewed by Steve Ralph
perfect as always Kay
and so much said in so few words yet again.
you have such an immence talent for doing that.
your pommy pal steve.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Sometimes promises should be silent till they manifest.
excellent Kay,

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
I can promise you anything, but you should always insist on the cash.
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