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Kay P M- Devenish

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Too many.(written in late 80's under my early pen name 'Sarah')
by Kay P M- Devenish

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Too many 'if's'
too many 'when's'
too many 'sorry's'
and
'Never agains'
too many promises
too many lies
far too many
'one more tries'.


How many were there
before I knew
that
ACTIONS
speak louder

than promises
DO ?

??


( too MANY!)




p.s. Thank you Bobbie yes it was spelling error...thanks for pointing it out,I changed it.Must have been rushing too much,sorry folks.


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Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 7/25/2003
Kay, this is very good, just a small correction, in the first line is it supposed to be too many? Otherwise it a great write.
Bobbi
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan 7/25/2003
Good write..to the point..
Jenni
Reviewed by Erica Ivory 7/25/2003
I hate promises... This is a great write.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 7/25/2003
Perfect write....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/25/2003
Oh Yes, I understand all to well, This was excellent,

Reindeer
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/25/2003
Wonderful Kay! Terse and true to the point, Excellent write!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/25/2003
to the point!!

Love
Tinka
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 7/25/2003
You are so right!!!!!!
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight* 7/25/2003
Thanks for these words of wisdom Kay.

~Joseph
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 7/25/2003
Perfection in a few words!
Reviewed by Steve Ralph 7/25/2003
perfect as always Kay
and so much said in so few words yet again.
you have such an immence talent for doing that.
your pommy pal steve.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 7/25/2003
Sometimes promises should be silent till they manifest.
excellent Kay,

Hugs
PJ
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 7/25/2003
I can promise you anything, but you should always insist on the cash.

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