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Dale Clark

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The Rain Came
by Dale Clark

Saturday, July 26, 2003

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The rain came, falling down
never touching the ground

The tears spilled, from my eyes
now just dust in the wind

The earth went round
no one fell off

The universe orbited
everything’s in flux

Our eyes were open
yet we did not see

Our ears heard
but no sound was made

A storm blew in
so black and gray

The thunder rumbled
silencing a sunny day

The lightning bolted
the air was electric

We were blue angels
our spirits flew
our wings glowed
we traveled the wires
which illuminated us

Our fear subsides
as the cosmos move

We bleed our pain
into the ocean

© 2003 CJ Clark
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Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 7/27/2003
Wow, this is a excellant moving piece. Flowed wonderfully and words to touch the soul so deep!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 7/26/2003
Well done.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/26/2003
I'm lost in this one CJ totally immersed in the cosmic realm of ideas where minds function beyond earth in illumination!Superb write!
Reviewed by Nancy D. 7/26/2003
Nicely done Dale, moving.

Nancy
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 7/26/2003
Excellent write....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Christine Morell 7/26/2003
This is outstanding Dale.
"We bleed our pain
into the ocean"
...memorable lines.
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 7/26/2003
Dale,

There is so much depth and meaning to this piece ... so moving ... splendid.

~Joseph
Reviewed by Aamie Burnley 7/26/2003
"... cosmos evolving, one universe at a time."
from 'rhythms remembered'
http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?AuthorID=7034&id=58522
Reviewed by martha summer (Reader) 7/26/2003
i only leave notes when i think a poem is awesome. you get a note.
Reviewed by Erica Ivory 7/26/2003
Our fear subsides
as the cosmos move

We bleed our pain
into the ocean

Put my mind in a distant gallexy of thought and provocation.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 7/26/2003
CJ,
This one flowed as if the
waters moving to
the ocean. Excellent.
PJ
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