|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Wow, this is a excellant moving piece. Flowed wonderfully and words to touch the soul so deep!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I'm lost in this one CJ totally immersed in the cosmic realm of ideas where minds function beyond earth in illumination!Superb write!|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Nicely done Dale, moving.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|This is outstanding Dale.
"We bleed our pain
into the ocean"
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
There is so much depth and meaning to this piece ... so moving ... splendid.
|Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
|"... cosmos evolving, one universe at a time."
from 'rhythms remembered'
|Reviewed by martha summer (Reader)
|i only leave notes when i think a poem is awesome. you get a note.|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|Our fear subsides
as the cosmos move
We bleed our pain
into the ocean
Put my mind in a distant gallexy of thought and provocation.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
This one flowed as if the
waters moving to
the ocean. Excellent.