burned on my memory
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Saturday, July 26, 2003
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that i saw on
that september day
of my mind,
depart. they hang on,
against clear blue
forced to choose to
die or die...
see what we
pentagon in flames...
a plane down in
they collapsed in
a hellish roar...then
an evil cloud
was silence...as we
mourned those that were
lost on that
that stand out, burned
in my memory.
"always remember...and never forget"
(c) karla dorman, 2003
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|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|sad, heartwrenching write about what we ALL saw that horrible, unforgettable day! powerful poem, well done! :( (((HUGS))) >tears < love, your twin, karen lynn.|
|Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister
|I don't think anyone will ever forget
This is a wonderful write,
I pray the terrible memories will turn in
someway to good things and lessons learned
and to a happy safe future for us all
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|We never will forget. Great write.|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|I hope all of us in America and the other sympathetic part of the world always remember this date and try to prevent a similar occurence to this tragic occurrence.
But let us not forget Karla that their are those who will rejoice and celebrate every time this date occurs. We must be strong and work toward of exclusion of our enemies from our borders. Bill hugs!!!!!!!!!!!!
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|An excellent piece karla, on such tragic events :(
|Reviewed by m w
|As they are burned into us all - a collective of regret and sorrow.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This one we will never forget karla!!
Great write girl!!
Happy birthday to you and Karen Okay!!
Sorry did not know... I saw it on Andy's page!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Another wonderful write from you Karla, about such a horrendous subject, one we will never forget, especially since September is so near.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Yep great write; buts what's to follow?|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Everything' Burned On Your Memory For Eternity!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Excellent write. No one will ever forget.