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I had posted this poem previously in a different place, but I have reworked it and am posting it here. Even if you had previously read it, it should come off as new to you.
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In a pool of cool blue
That is waiting for me and you
We will bath in the midnight hour
Our naked bodies caressed by waters power
Shooting stars fire across our passion
With us devouring loves daily ration
Nibbling on each other over a gentle swim
With love, sweet love filling us to the very brim
Occasionally diving into the depths of life
My husband…and me your wife
Yes, life is grand
When happiness is at our command
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| Reviewed by serenety L |
7/30/2003 |
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I loved the last 2 lines.
Very well written.
Nico |
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| Reviewed by Mark Mahoney |
7/28/2003 |
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| Very nicely done, love is all everyone needs...well done, take care...Mark ... |
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| Reviewed by Steve Patterson |
7/28/2003 |
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smile...good 4 u...& good write
me |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/28/2003 |
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| nice write! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
7/28/2003 |
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| it did, thanks |
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| Reviewed by Jack Roberts |
7/28/2003 |
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Very Nice! I like this!
Jack |
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| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
7/28/2003 |
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In a pool of cool blue
That is waiting for me and you
We will bath in the midnight hour
Our naked bodies caressed by waters power
Shooting stars fire across our passion
With us devouring loves daily ration
Nibbling on each other over a gentle swim
With love, sweet love filling us to the very brim
Occasionally diving into the depths of life
My husband…and me your wife
Yes, life is grand
When happiness is at our command
Smooth sensual delight..So romanticly beautiful!
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
7/28/2003 |
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"With love, sweet love filling us to the very brim
Occasionally diving into the depths of life"
Lovely lines. This is beautiful, Sara.
~Chrissie |
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