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Infatuation Blast
by Erica Ivory

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Infatuation.. revised

Ohh God
I love you
came from his lips..
I will love you
There is no
Not lies..
Blind emotion..
flowing on emotion..
Believing love to be true ..
Not understanding..
That emotions change..
as people do..
leads to complications..
Not for me..
I never say I love you..
out load..
I try to imprison it
in my mind..
Shoved back into
a hole of darkness..
it tries to climb..
Do not ever utter
those words to me again..
I do not want your vows ..
of undying love..
I do not want promises
that cannot last..
Promises of love..
Simply an emotional ride..
It will bring you up
spin you around..
Dizzy with love..
you will hold on tight..
your resistance low..
you have no where
left to go..
so it brings you
down fast..
End of ride..
Infatuation blast..
Infatuation over..
No more
No more
This ride is not
what I wish..
So please don't let
I love you..
ever pass from your lips..

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Reviewed by Fritz Barnes 7/30/2003
Much hard truth, delightfully and artfully written.
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 7/29/2003
A person can get to this after hurt so many times, huh? Powerful write...
In Spirit,
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/29/2003
Well this makes me think.....think hard!!

This moves me so damn fast/hard my head is spinning...and my heart is yearning ...but havne words to describe this very powerful write with lots of How do i say!!!

Reviewed by John Bidwell 7/29/2003
Wow. This got to me in many ways.
I'm strapped in to this emotional rollercoaster called life, but I sure want to get out of it sometimes.
Sometimes I wish my heart would shut up, but then I guess it wouldn't be my heart.
Reviewed by jing javier 7/29/2003
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) 7/29/2003
Very powerful write like swords to the soul
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 7/29/2003
OUCH ERICA, can feel the pain that lances searingly forth from this...Excellant write!!!!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/29/2003
Great emotive write Erica, love has so many misleading faces, we can't help but be confused sometimes!
Reviewed by john zimmerman 7/29/2003
been there,
got the lacerations
on my tongue

good write

Reviewed by Dale Clark 7/29/2003
Emotions captured in this meaningful piece! Excellent!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 7/29/2003
Well done, great capturing of emotions.
Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll 7/28/2003
Who needs him Erica, you've got friends at the den. Nice write.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/28/2003
This one cut deeply into my heart, I understand all to well, this was excellent,

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 7/28/2003

Imangination Is More Important Than Knowledge!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 7/28/2003
I promise
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 7/28/2003
Nice write Erica! I liked this!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 7/28/2003
But, see, this is the thing. The real love is out there for you, you'll find out someday.
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 7/28/2003
You capture the moment well. Good write, Erica.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 7/28/2003
I know what you mean. Good write Erica!

Also thank you so much for all your wonderful supports and comments to my work. I appreciate your kindness!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 7/28/2003
Maybe in Spanish Erica. By the way thanks for the kings meal. The thought was just as good as the real food. Your poem is delightful and I can relate to its meaning. amor usted mi amor. G
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 7/28/2003
Ouch I can feel the pain in this one and can relate. Great write.

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