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|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
|That was very interesting. Gave me some more insight on the difference between men and women.
But: Are you sure that it is only women who go for the long, lasting, exclusive love?
Enjoyed reading this.
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
A most interesting concept, your enquiring mind has crafted an excellent thought provoking poem intricately penned Masood. A question I have however: had it not been for a woman initially admiring a rose's beautiful bloom, would man ever have been intrigued, or stopped to savour its perfume? In savouring its perfume, does man not look closer, and begin to admire the beauty of the bloom? Just an observation :-) Thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by Cles Wilson
|Excellent Writing. You have the gift of a true poet!|
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
|Masood, the title of this poem attracted me. Naturally being a woman, I am curious. lol
Interesting thoughts here. I especially enjoyed the lines
Women want a long exclusive love
Men try some quick abrupt move
Women look for the roseís bloom
But men just care about its perfume
You really are a great poet.
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|This is wonderful and so true. You really hit the nail on the head here and so beautifully written too. I never thought about the Day of Judgement when God will tell who's right. I like that alot. But I know most 94% of the time I am right. - LOL - I think.
Thank you for this : )ing & wonderful poem.
Many Blessings for you and your family
|Reviewed by Lisa Young (Reader)
|I agree wiyh Peggy about the last 2 lines but also thing we'll find that neither of us is right. I really liked "Women look for the roseís bloom But men just care about its perfume" So beautifully put and true! Lisa|