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Dreams
by John H Bidwell
Tuesday, July 29, 2003
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Dreams
Please don’t feel sad, some dreams are only dreams.
For most have never known such heights at all.
And though my tears may now be forming streams
I got to touch the sky before my fall.
Of course, I swear, I’d do it all again-
Relive each precious moment one by one,
For even in this loss no other men
Had such a dream, yes, even though it’s done.
I now must trod a winding road alone,
Still thanking friends who help me on the way,
Just now and then remembering the phone,
And all the roles that certain dreamers play.
The vision that I carry in my head,
Your voice that put such magic in my ears,
The memory of every word you said,
These things will keep me going through the years.
Some dreams are meant to dream and not come true ,
And that’s the kind of dream that came to me.
But still, because I had this dream of you
The world is now a better place to be.
John H Bidwell
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
11/9/2003 |
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Some dreams are meant to dream and not come true,
And that’s the kind of dream that came to me.
But still, because I had this dream of you
The world is now a better place to be.
..alas ..sometimes I feel like this..perhaps you're right John..some dreams are meant to dream and not come true...:(
Vesna |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
7/30/2003 |
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| Well done! Excellent description and you've captured the beauty of dreaming! |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
7/30/2003 |
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Hi John,
Ohhh... This one made
the tears fill my eyes
Soooo Beautiful...
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by Jackie Brooks |
7/30/2003 |
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| Sometimes it is sad to wake up and find it was all just a dream. Lovely poem John. Jackie <> < |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
7/29/2003 |
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John, you touch my soul with this... excellent...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Londis Carpenter |
7/29/2003 |
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| Perhaps one of the best poems I have yet read on AD (including my own). This poem is immortal. It goes into my library. |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
7/29/2003 |
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Oh Make me cry
John Bidwell
You romantic angel..
She will be in tears...
PJ |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
7/29/2003 |
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Beautiful just so lovely,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Marlene Dawn |
7/29/2003 |
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Beautiful heartfelt poetry. bravo.
*Marlene* |
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