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Summer's Second Language
by anne cunningham

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 Summer's Second Language


 


Thick still air, 
cannot compete 
with the breeze.  


Posturing trees, 
consider their 
guard to be down.  


Blue-gray clouds 
erase the shine 
from the sun.  


The rain falls, 
driving back 
the mercury.  
A puddle forms, 
looking foreign 
on the sidewalk.  


Until stomping 
solidly upon it, 
ankles remember.     


 


....this was a very nearly published piece in a competition for a week at a writer's retreat.  it was submitted in a grouping of summer-y/nature-y poems all of which made it past three cuts with the editors.  the fourth, deciding cut, however, went to someone else.   all arrived back home, pages a bit worse for wear, with tally marks in the upper righthand margins.  dunno ... sometimes "worse for wear" is just as nice as winning.  i only post this today because it finally rained here after sooooooooooooo long.  i happened to be out running errands when the storm hit and it was interesting to watch everyone react to it. 


 


 



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Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
anne, i can see why this piece would catch the eye of an editor. it's quite something. tks
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Wonderful imagery....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick
Nicely done!!! Love nature poems and this one is simply elegant.
Reviewed by sue
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Nice imagery!!
Reviewed by E. Richardson
This is very good...I especially like the reference to stomping in puddles...heheheh...brings back images of youthful pastimes.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Nice imagery. Should have won.

They probably had so many entries it was hard to decide. I'm doing a judging right now, and everything submitted is so good...the final decision is tough.

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The plot builds relentlessly and so well that by the end one does not know whether to laugh or cry..  
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