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Au revoir tristesse
by serenety L

Wednesday, July 30, 2003

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Hi everybody


Sorry for having been so lazy lately. I went for a new job, found me a new love and went away on vacation - there wasn't much time left for posting poems. I promise to catch up within the next couple of days and comment on what you have posted recently.


As everybody enjoyed my French lines, I decided to share something in French with you. Okay Paul - are you going to translate it for them or should I do it myself? Or maybe there is somebody else who wants to comment and tell the meaning of my words??


 


Elle est fatiguée
fatiguée de la vie
d'une vie sans amour
ni bonheur


après la journée
elle repose sa tete sur le coussin
elle ferme ses yeux
et prie que ce soit pour l'éternité


mais une nouvelle journée
la salue
et quelques fois
le bonheur apparait
quand on ne l'attend pas


Au revoir tristesse
Salut amour !


PS: Scroll down for the translation !!!!!!


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 4/28/2006
Je connais très bien ces sentiments. Merci de partager ces vers. Amour et paix,

Régis
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 9/16/2003
I don't know any french, but the poem is wonderful. Thanks much for reading and commenting on my work.....[[[[[HUGS]]]]]
Reviewed by Dale Clark 8/7/2003
It's beautiful! And thankfully with your translation I know what it said. ;)
Reviewed by William Bonilla 8/5/2003
WHTAEVER YOU WROTE, I TRIED TO UNDERSTAND,
I DID JUST A FEW WORDS
WHATEVER,
IT SOUNDS SO DELICIOUS

WILLIAM
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 8/4/2003
Sexy! How original :) I love that!

Thanks,
Emilie
Reviewed by The Gentle Man 8/4/2003
I am very happy for you! Hope you will never be without a job or love again.....smile
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/4/2003
Oooooo! Congratulations! I'm so glad you've found yourself a new job and a new love. Wow! Aint live grand?! I'm so happy for you.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 8/3/2003
glad you are able to say good-bye to sadness and welcome to love
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 8/3/2003
Bueno para ustedes Nico-(Good for you Nico).
Fasten your seat belt and enjoy the ride. I love french but don't know any. amor usted mi amor. G
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/2/2003
Beautiful! So glad you translated it for us, so happy for you!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 7/31/2003
Absolutely beautiful! Welcome back!

~Joseph
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 7/31/2003
Truly lovely.
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 7/30/2003
I dont know what this says, but it sure looks pretty! lol

Jack
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 7/30/2003
Oh Nico, I don't understand the French at all, but your translation fills my heart. It makes me feel so strong reading about your happiness. Your positive write makes me feel positive about life. What more could a poet ask for?
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 7/30/2003
Superbly done....loved ure style....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 7/30/2003
Shoot, I labored over the translation, then I saw Serenety's post. Got most of it too. Bravo. Come up for air. You are missed.
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 7/30/2003
Happiness Is What Ya Make Of It In Any Language!

TRASK
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 7/30/2003
A beautiful language translations not needed .........smile
Voila!!!
Reviewed by serenety L 7/30/2003
Okay, here comes the translation:

She is tired, tired of life,
tired of a life without love, without luck.
After her day she puts her head on the pillow
closing her eyes
and prays that this will last forever.
But a new day kisses her awake,
and sometimes
happiness comes when no-one expects it.
Good-bye sadness
Welcome love !
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/30/2003
She is tired tired from life of a life without love or happiness after the day she rests his tete on the cushion she closes its eyes and taken that this be for eternity
but a new day greets it and some times the happiness apparait when one does not await it
Good-bye sadness good day love!

Hope this is it

love
tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 7/30/2003
(((serenety)))

tres bon! :) (although my french is severely limited...please translate!)

it flows nicely, and looks pretty! :)

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/30/2003
((((serenety))))

i don't know what you wrote (my french is severely limited! LOL), but i think french is a beautiful language, and love what you wrote! now, do me a favor...OH please translate into english what you wrote! LOL so glad to see you posting again; i was starting to wonder about you...glad you are doing great! hope it continues! (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :) MAGNIFIQUE!!!!
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