|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|that last line was the hook...it's the kind of line that makes you stop for a minute and think about what the piece meant...now lemme go think...|
|Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
|Quite an interesting point of view. That last line is a real zinger.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|"Animals dream of light and run from the night!" Vivid imagery, and a great poem.|
|Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
|A red moon rolls across the horizon,
and dark serpents and lizards emerge
from the bottom of the dry sea
There's so much imagery here!
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|always enjoy your work|
|Reviewed by Jan Peregrine (Reader)
|Sure glad we're not animals!|
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|This is a very deep write, I shall enjoy read this again! ~Z~|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|This is a very interesting poem. For me, it's a teaser. Oh how I'd love to talk to you about this one! would love to know your thoughts behind this poem. hehehe!
"The moon becomes pale,
and high in the sky,
parodies the sun with the sun's own light."
Ah yes, the moon has no light of its own, it only reflects light.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Heavy. Hes, as Kate said, thought provoking.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Thought provoking write!|