|Reviewed by Michelle Carucci (Reader)
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Very nice! Nothing like those dreams! ~SH~|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|This one is so good Jason!|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Intense longing and beauty,
my friend. Love is fragile..
and sometimes so out of reach.
|Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
|serene and lovely, tks|
|Reviewed by J. Murphy
|Nice rhythm in this piece and the voice is wishful and also grounded. J.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Ah...we all wish...very good. Love it.|
|Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman
|A succinct testament to that unrequited. I enjoyed this little spot of angst.|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Oh, yes, the everlasting taste of sweet love... great write...
|Reviewed by a- maryllis
|this is nice.. good job|