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Daddy's Girl by Nick Choo Tuesday, January 29, 2002 Share Print Save Become a Fan Mommy's sitting over there With tears a-pouring down her face. Daddy's standing by her side, Engulfing her in warm embrace. Despite the fact that Daddy's dead, His fright'ning presence's clear to see. And since he's holding Mommy tight, He loves my Mommy more than me. "Daddy loves you more than me," I say; she says: "How can you say that, how?" "Daddy loves you more than me Because he's hugging you right now."

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Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra	1/31/2002

Beautiful!




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	1/29/2002

I agree with April. This can be worked on somemore to get some emotions flowing. Sandie Angel :o)




Reviewed by April Pittman	1/29/2002

Hmm. I think with a little more time this could have been expanded and made much better but as is... it is fine. You convey your emotion. Even have a little theme going on... but it could be great with a little revision. April