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Don't Depress
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Sunday, August 03, 2003

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Whatever you do don't go down the hill in attitude, keep up your lattitude.

Arguing a little,
then I lift my foot up off the trottle.
I refuse to further depress,
but instead I try and regress,
my opponents attitude,
so as to improve our total latitude.

For awhile she had me going,
and I almost forgot I had been growing.
Growing away from negativity,
and concentrating more on positivity.

Got into a little name calling,
throwing blame for the stupid arguing,
You know the saying,
the evil ones way of betraying.

Along comes the engagment ring,
then the marriage ring,
then the suffering.

It doesn't have to be this way,
we don't have to fall for the devils play.

So I pull myself together,
to help bring us out of the bad weather.

No more depression,
forget the devils lesson.


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Reviewed by serenety L 8/5/2003
Loved the play of words with "ring"..
Very wise Grady
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 8/4/2003
nicely written, I hope the bad weather has passed
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/3/2003 your message here Grady, wonderfully written,

Reviewed by Linda Murray 8/3/2003
So much emotion in this piece. Positive attitude to get rid of the depression. Good Luck.
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 8/3/2003
Believe It Or Not_

People Who're Depressed Are Depressing People To Begin With!

Remember Best Measurement Of Mans(Womans) Mentality Is Those Thing's He Will Argue About!!


Reviewed by Lynn Barry 8/3/2003
Love these positive messages... so well done, as usual...
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/3/2003
you are in my prayers. hang in there, and rely on god to get you through this! powerful expression of emotions in this write; well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :(
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 8/3/2003
Good one, Grady. I picked up on this:
"Along comes the engagment ring,
then the marriage ring,
then the suffering."
Stay positive, man!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/3/2003
Well done!!
And good luck!!
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 8/3/2003
Whoa! Hang in there, Grady!
"Along comes the engagment ring,
then the marriage ring,
then the suffering."
This is a serious but, hehehe, also funny stanza! Good luck, buddy, we understand!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 8/3/2003
Amen to that, G! Stay strong...
In Spirit,
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