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|Reviewed by Amy
|Very nice title. Good use of repetition. My owm poems are shorter, though, and this one could use a bit of "settlement." The idea stayed true to itself, but for a bit oo long. It could stand to be edited by using one word instead of two - stronger ststements.|
|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|You dream of Africa but have a Celtic soul.|
|Reviewed by Heidi Macomber
|I like the theme in the title. The crisp images absorb me into the dream and I wake up abruptly with the dramatic change of tone midway. I'm caught off guard. The voice moves from dreamy to active and picks up speed. I like the space before the last lines. A breath to let it all sink in. Very nice.
|Reviewed by Lisa Cannons
|Can I come with you?.....You transported me straight into your imagination, I felt your longing and made it my own ::HUGS::
|Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
very well written. So pretty and wonderfully worded.One of your very best works I have read. Gregg
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
This is fantastic...
|Reviewed by William DeVault
|uh oh...someone's getting ready to go native on us! Nice images, I enjoyed the visualization and the hunger, the wistfulness, of the vision.|