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there was a time before this new age when people came together just to commune, now we need props or electronics.. here is a view of the pass
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The choir enters with a harmonic song rocking as they march down the aisle feet of the church, tapping out time no man made instruments here only the voices and bodies used as musical replacements hands clapping in time, keeping the beat robes swishing, sounding like snare drums words said in time, for those who cannot read repeated back in voices of song, in melody
Heat rising as choir enters the loft solo lead now takes her place in front soft humming from sopranos bass backing them up low and deep sweet alto's a counter point a little off beat a call to the faithful to come forth moans came from the church pews fever pitched, awashed and filled with adoration the spirit takes one, she talks in voices a hush falls over all, for the moment of reverence is now...LET THE CHURCH SAY "AMEN"
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| Reviewed by Floreann Cawley |
8/3/2003 |
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| one outstanding write..Floreann |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/3/2003 |
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| Amen! the way it was,for me the way it still is;-)Beautiful write ,well done! |
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
8/3/2003 |
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| Amen, I remember those days too, excellent write! ~Z~ |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
8/3/2003 |
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Cheryl,
I loved this one... Excellent.
Lady Peg |
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| Reviewed by L M (Reader) |
8/3/2003 |
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Excellent piece. Amen!
LM |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
8/3/2003 |
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Amen A wonderful write
William |
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