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David P Mohd

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IS IT GOD'S FAULT
by David P Mohd
Sunday, August 03, 2003
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   I love her very much.
   But she... 


   What should I do?
   I have no idea.
 
   My heart beats for her.
   But hers...


   I know it is neither mine
   Nor hers fault.


   Then is it godís fault?


 

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Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 2/3/2004
it is the fault of time my friend. Your aches is felt in this write.

Susan
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/4/2003
Never give up.
Where there's God
there's hope.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 8/4/2003
Sometimes love is not meant to be sexual in nature.
Reviewed by Nancy D. 8/4/2003
David,
You can't make someone "love you" no matter how you feel, it comes from within both hearts. Never give up a love for you is out there. Take care.

Nancy
Reviewed by Linda Hill 8/4/2003
((( David )))
No, it isn't Gods fault.
Never give up hope, when
thats all you have.
Excellent heartfelt write.

~~Linda~~
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/4/2003
So heart-wrenching, so very moving, excellently written,

Reindeer
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