|Reviewed by a- maryllis
WELCOME BACK! I've missed ya
The den's just not the same without your writes. This is beautiful... great message.
Keep it up!
|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|I'm going to echo Karen a bit, I do think this is one of your best poems so far. I've missed your poetry.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This is wonderful work!!
|Reviewed by Laura Via
|What can I say that has not been said before ... wonderful lesson within these here words. Enjoyed reading this very much, and WB!!!
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Strong message, and the last stanza really got to me! It hits on some of my own personal issues. I have missed you and your work! I haven't been here that much either, a lot of goings on since summer started! lol!
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|This is wonderful work.|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|For the rains come again and the dike needs repair
All hands are needed this day
United in need once again and it's fair
To tell that the children watching will say
To their children don't fight, there may come a time
The rivers all rise to put fear in your eyes
And put your own children's sweet lives on the line
Don't fight if you wish to be wise
I don't know why you felt it's not ready... I can't imagine what you would need to improve on this superior write.. Smile it's brilliant!
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Totally wonderful, Adam! Love the message...
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This has a great feel to it. Wonderful write.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|you may not feel this is one of your best writes, adam, but as for me, i think it is absolutely TERRRIFIC! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. :) (((HUGS)))|