|Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
|Intriguing bit of whimsy. I would be curious to know what inspired it.|
|Reviewed by Candida Eittreim
This is a very well written, and magical piece of prose. The imagery here is perfect.
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|I felt myself standing in this land so well described.
|Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
|Very cool word pictures here!|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Wonderful write with beautiful imagery.
|Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
|this one gave me many visions, of life... color and nature......|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Awesome wonderful write!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|AWESOME! SPLENDID DESCRIPTIVES! INFORMATIVE!|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|i like this|
|Reviewed by Jan Peregrine (Reader)
|Wow, I don't remember reading this before either. Gorgeous.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I loved the imagery you showed in this write and what a beautiful image as you say your first 3 lines:
streak across an orange sky
as the sun sinks below the sands "
Thank you for a wonderful memory that you brought back to my mind.
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|What imagery, Kurt! Great write...
|Reviewed by john zimmerman
|a dense, satisfying read
i enjoyed this very much--
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Very good surreal projection. There is so very much to this poem, so much "grit" and "guts" that I just wouldn't know where to start trying to mention them all. An absolute wonderful choice of scrambled words here. Thank you.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|good write, father messick; enjoyed! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. :)|