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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
8/6/2003 |
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This was such a lovely poem, so very beautiful, A lovely poem for your father from your heart..
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
8/6/2003 |
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Looking inward, we sometimes find wonderful help...so glad you found comfort.
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
8/6/2003 |
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This is truly beautiful, and one that your father will treasure, also... thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
8/6/2003 |
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| How beautiful this is! Touched my heart. |
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| Reviewed by L M (Reader) |
8/6/2003 |
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So sad but also the ending is so wonderful.
LM |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
8/6/2003 |
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| Sorry to hear about your dads passing this was a lovely write always remember they live on in our heart and soul |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
8/6/2003 |
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I'm so happy for you. This is heartfelt and beautiful.
~Chrissie. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader) |
8/6/2003 |
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| So good to know they are with us! Good message! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
8/6/2003 |
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| Wish thoughts shared here. Death is just a change in energies. Great write. |
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| Reviewed by serenety L |
8/6/2003 |
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A wonderful poem. I know how that, once a person is away, the time you spent with him or her becomes even more precious and will always be inside you.
Excellent.
S |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
8/6/2003 |
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| yes, a very good poem Erica, people we love never leave us. I still have dreams of early years and friends and family are in them. love you my love.(amor usted mi amor) you are most dearly here "in spirit." G |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
8/6/2003 |
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How true this beautiful poem is and I can relate to it as I also feel my father with me ...in my heart.
Best wishes always
from
kay |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
8/6/2003 |
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| You hit me where it hurts with this one, Erica. Like Jay, I'll get back to you. Wonderful words. |
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| Reviewed by J. Murphy |
8/5/2003 |
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| Very well penned and great enlightenment at the end. J. |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
8/5/2003 |
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YES, the soul that is loved and needed stays in the earth's atmosphere..in the astral assisting with love those that need them..there are many ways you can contact your Dad..the simplest is during meditation...their love permeates the loved one...thankyou for this lovely poem..
Vesna |
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