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the first snow, last day of school befor vacations.. on and on..sweet memorys
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pulling on gloves, snow boots and winter coat wrapping a scarf round my neck, hat pulled low peeping out of the slit between hat and scarf with limited vision, moving slow in my bundling
waddling out to the fort, to do battle of the ages picking up the snow and tasting it, soft and cold first snow of the season always taste the best wadding up balls, making a pile like cannon stacks
digging a tunnel as an escape, in case you lose hearing the villain taking their place, peering out desiring the first hit, I aim and fire.. making a whistling sound as I hear snowball go splat, score one for me, I hop up to see
then out of the blinding sun comes the return hitting me between scarf and hat, a wall of snow I am down on the ground, the enemy pounces rolling we laugh me screaming, "I give" my forfeit being, snow angels for all to see
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
8/7/2003 |
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| A delightful write. Excellent. |
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| Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington |
8/6/2003 |
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Boy...does this ever bring back the memories!
~Jackie~ |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
8/6/2003 |
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Great imagery, not ready for the snow yet.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
8/6/2003 |
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| Don't you just adore those first snowfalls, this is wonderful. |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
8/6/2003 |
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OH how I remember! But I don't miss the cold... great write...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Floreann Cawley |
8/6/2003 |
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| a wonderful write..Floreann |
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| Reviewed by L M (Reader) |
8/6/2003 |
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This one reminded me of one I wrote
of today. very good.
LM |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/6/2003 |
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(((cheryl)))
yesterday was 104; today they're forecasting 106 or better
just what i needed to read on a hot summer day--this brought back memories of snowfalls i remember from my youth in ohio
how i miss the snow--all we get here is ice
thank you--and stay cool
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
8/6/2003 |
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Cheryl,
You given me so many memories in this ones.
{{hugs thank you
"waddling out to the fort, to do battle of the ages
picking up the snow and tasting it, soft and cold
first snow of the season always taste the best
wadding up balls, making a pile like cannon stacks
digging a tunnel as an escape, in case you lose
hearing the villain taking their place, peering out
desiring the first hit, I aim and fire..
making a whistling sound as I hear snowball go
splat, score one for me, I hop up to see"
PJ
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