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| Reviewed by Patricia Gomes |
8/8/2003 |
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| Exquisite! I love the rain - stanzas three and four echoed here last night as I began to doze - excellent work, dear, much kudos! |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
8/8/2003 |
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I love the rain and it's orchestration
on the roof. You've captured it so well. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/8/2003 |
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| oh, this is absolutely ADORABLE, kay! thanks for sharing this wonderful write; i truly enjoyed this! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/8/2003 |
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(((kay)))
o, i love this--this is a keeper
PERFECTION!! the imagery is outstanding!
send some of those tap dancing *did you say naked? heehee* raindrops to texas--haven't seen rain in MONTHS
(((((HUGS))))) and thanks for my smiles this morning
love,
karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
8/8/2003 |
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| Truly perfect, Kay...was doing that at my home yesterday ;-) |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
8/8/2003 |
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Kay this is excellant and beautiful!!!!
Ohhhhhh how I love the rain, to be out in it and a part of that great dance!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
8/8/2003 |
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Ahhhhh, to be a kid again! Ha ha, I guess you didn't exactly say that :) You captured a moment in your mind and spun it to paper perfectly.
Thanks,
Emilie |
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| Reviewed by Steve Ralph |
8/7/2003 |
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this is beautiful Kay i can almost see you laying there listening to the rain.
your pommy pal steve |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/7/2003 |
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I love the soothing sound of rain...but sounds better on my head!! LOL!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Jackie Brooks |
8/7/2003 |
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| Great poem, I love the sound of rain too, on tin, on canvas, on the car roof, just as long as it is not on my head! Jackie <> < |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
8/7/2003 |
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| Wwow this one of the best writes I have read on raindrops! This is a gem! |
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| Reviewed by Rick Magers (Reader) |
8/7/2003 |
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G'devenin' Kay........Your poetry is pleasing to the eye, and soothing to a tired old brain. I enjoyed every word, going back twice to re-read. Special meaning for me because I put a tin roof on this little mountain home when I built it 17 years ago. A great pleasure is listening to raindrops and squirrels, dancing right above my head.
Thanks for a pleasant trip through your head. |
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| Reviewed by richard poor |
8/7/2003 |
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| i just knock on the cieling with the broom handle...very good write!!! |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
8/7/2003 |
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| Kay.....excellent write.....you have captured much here my friend....I love the sound of rain too.....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
8/7/2003 |
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One Thing Bout Rain It Washes Away Taht Dirt!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
8/7/2003 |
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| a great one kay |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
8/7/2003 |
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| Kay, the rain can be soothing, but it has rained for months on end, and a little sunshine here would be a welcomed friend. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/7/2003 |
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| Fantastic, creative, whimsical, wondrous, superb! Perfect! This is my kind of write Kay!I love it!;-)! |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
8/7/2003 |
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Oh, did you ever capture this one, Kay. Great imagery, beautifully choreographed. I too, live in a house with a steel roof. And thanks to you, I will be writing on that subject very soon.
Leland |
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