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She used to write a good letter,
she would tell of trivialities, and embellish them,
with wordy descriptions, to make people smile.
She gave up penning letters
when she had her kids.

She used to be funny at parties,
she would tell stories, with embellishments,
of her particular plights, to make people laugh.
She gave up going to parties
when her mind went on the skids.

She used to think she didn't matter,
she lived inner fantasies, and embellished them,
with wordy descriptions, to make people see.
She gave up becoming reality
and drifted as she slid.

She now knows she is important,
she lives humanity and embellishes actions,
of her particular plights, to make people feel.
She gave up worrying about insanities,
and recreated her id.

Erin Moen
Copyright 2003

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Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
Ohhhhhhhhh, god, Erin, you are a crafty one, aren't you? Weary from traveling, surrounded by laundry and you pick up a 'pen' and produce perfection, just to remind yourself that we, your eager readers, are clammoring for another eloquent peek into your inner workings.. This is a piece that quietly shouts at me.. and proves once again that you write with every honest fiber that is you. What a poem! love, katy xox. welcome back, me sweet! (smile).
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
This was excellent..I liked this so much, excellent message here..

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
This is excellantly done Erin, message also well taken!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
well penned!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Very Good, Erwin!
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
I'll try this.... sure needed to read this today, Erin! Thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Wow! this is so good! Terrific!
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
Excellent write.
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
BRAVO!...My dear. There's a quiet beauty about this piece.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
what a write....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Tony Nerone
Wonderfully penned, Erin.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen
OOoh...LOVED the flow of this one, Erin! Great message within...Wonderful write!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Hey sweetie what an Idea
.She now knows she is important,
she lives humanity and embellishes actions,
of her particular plights, to make people feel.
She gave up worrying about insanities,
and recreated her id. "
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
"recreated her id." That can solve a world of problems. Very excellent write, Erin.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Fantastic write!
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Not too shabby of one either.

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