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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
6/3/2008 |
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| We all struggle to find peace , solitude and clarity of mind. Enjoye the poem...M |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
1/2/2007 |
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| I enjoyed your poem. |
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| Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore |
8/11/2005 |
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| sounds like everyman and woman's struggle and final battle with life, fate itself...a graphic and poignant write, poet... |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
8/11/2005 |
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You obviously know a lot about Celtic mythology Gwen.
I liked the story of this and the "other worldly" feel, and as a Knight in Tarnished Armour myself I felt for the guy.
best
Ian |
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| Reviewed by Don Baird |
8/17/2003 |
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| This is poetic and it's highest level. Story line, presentation............ nice. |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
8/15/2003 |
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| Splendid masterpiece ! |
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| Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme |
8/12/2003 |
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| Great write Gwen :0) |
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| Reviewed by The Gentle Man |
8/12/2003 |
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| Very nice indeed Gwen.......thanks for sharing! |
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| Reviewed by Toris Okotie |
8/12/2003 |
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| nicely written, well expressed and quite a lovely picture. |
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| Reviewed by Marco Landi |
8/11/2003 |
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| this is a wonderful work of art brava |
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| Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington |
8/10/2003 |
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Keep thy pen in hand, mi'lady. For thy words do proudly form to fit any a knightly tale.
~Jackie~ |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
8/10/2003 |
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| Gwen this is a terrific poem, before I read your comment about facing west. I thought the knight was facing west because of the setting of the sun. peace |
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| Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick |
8/10/2003 |
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| Very nice! |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
8/10/2003 |
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| One piece....fantastic write!!! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
8/9/2003 |
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| Ditto....great work. |
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| Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi |
8/9/2003 |
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| This is a good poem , Gwen. Yes, the knight is bound to live again.. painful and delightful. |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
8/9/2003 |
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Absolutely Wonderful..outstanding!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
8/9/2003 |
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Most Interestingly So Good!
TRASL |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
8/9/2003 |
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Brilliant work Gwen ... enjoyed very much!
~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Ray Harris (Reader) |
8/9/2003 |
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"Death watches
and confidently awaits
my reluctant surrender..."
Very well felt! Such a well written story of life... and death! Thank you for sharing! |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
8/9/2003 |
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"Foiled, are my plans!
Lost, is my beloved!
Unborn, are my children!" OUCH! Elegantly sad writing done with class. This is a masterpiece of painful words. I adore this.
Thank you,
Emilie |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/9/2003 |
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Exquisite write!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
8/9/2003 |
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Note: In ancient times, Kings, noblemen, etc. were often buried with their heads toward the west with the thought in mind that when they "arose/stood up/began" a new life, that they would be FACING EAST, viewing the dawning of a new day/life.
Note: I wrote the poem a few weeks ago, but after finding Richard's poem last week, I rewote the first three lines of my poem to agree with the picture. |
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| Reviewed by Londis Carpenter |
8/9/2003 |
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| Wonderful. Western Ho! |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
8/9/2003 |
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The picture and the poem are so complementary, and so well done. Excellent.
Leland |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
8/9/2003 |
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Exquisite!! I am in awe Gwen..you are a master with the pen!!
Brilliant work!!
Vesna |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
8/9/2003 |
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| Touches the heart and gut. Great write and beautiful painting. I admire the fact that you asked :-) |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
8/9/2003 |
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| A knight's prayer at the end of his journey. Just to have his head headed West when placed to rest. How simple the request ... but what an untold story it tells. Very good Gwen. Bill Murray |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
8/9/2003 |
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Hi Gwen,
Absolutely beautiful....
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader) |
8/9/2003 |
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| Oh, oh, this is absolutely brilllliant. Bravo, BRAVO! |
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| Reviewed by Denise Nowakowski |
8/9/2003 |
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| Very good indeed. I look forward to reading more of your writings. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/9/2003 |
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| Gwen, you did the picture proud! A magnificent piece of writing! |
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| Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader) |
8/9/2003 |
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| Milady Gwen...bravo, bravo. Thou hast wirtten a peom that appeals to this poet's very nature; how it sings to my soul...~DarkBard~ |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
8/9/2003 |
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Wonderful piece of writing!
Kudos!
tony:) |
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